求修改的英文

你这一段英文基本上是用英文来表述中文的思维和词汇，要改的话就只能是“全身外科手术”式的“改”，这对你来说既不实际也没什么帮助。下面问你几个问题：slapstick 的中文是什么？使用时要用冠词streams of people：这种表达会让人觉得奇怪。crowds？busily =/= 匆忙地classes are not conscious movement 想表达什么？wander 做插入语，你想表达什么？to buy snacks disgruntled complained of not to eat 想说什么？Has been fixed become memories. 的主语呢？teachers and divisions 是两个不同范畴的名词，并列放在一起是表达什么？Perhaps teachers and divisions, or dare not and teacher exchanges, so will feel annoyed. 你想表达什么？（这个句子很混乱，实在猜不出崇文意思。）Three years time hurried by 可以改成 Three years having passed bythe arrival of the graduation season 做插入语让人不知所云，但可以作句子的主语：Three years having passed by，the arrival of the graduation season finally came.we are about to leave for the three years of junior high school life 中的 for 改成 afterrefueling 用在这里是什么意思？I hope you can enter the ideal high school 中的 the 换成 your。 再努一把力，更上一层楼！

不知道楼主说的更改是动词还是名词，动词有：1.alter vt.改变Has she altered her mind?她改变主意了吗?修改The tailor altered the jacket to fit me.裁缝将夹克修改得合我的身。【俚】阉割,去势vi.改变,变样The city has altered almost out of recognition since I left there five years ago.自从五年前我离开以后,那座城市已变得几乎认不出了。2.change vt.(使)改变;更改;使变化[(+from...to...)][(+into)]On second thoughts he changed his mind.进一步考虑后,他改变了主意。换;交换,互换[(+for)]We changed seats in the interval.中间休息时,我们交换了一下座位。换(衣服);替(婴孩)换尿布或衣服;给(床)换床单She changed the baby often.她不时地给婴孩换尿布。兑换(钱)[(+for/into)]Let me change the dollar bill for coins.让我把这张美元的纸钞换成硬币。换乘(车等)You'll have to change planes at Seattle.你得在西雅图换乘另一架飞机。vi.改变;更改;变化[(+from...to...)]In fall the leaves change from green to brown.秋天,树叶由绿变成褐色。更衣[(+out of/into)]He changed into a new suit.他换上一套新的西装。换车In New York, you'll change for Boston.你在纽约换车去波士顿。换档[(+up/down/into/to)]n.变化;变更;变迁[C][U][(+of/in)]Many changes have taken place since then.自那以来,发生了许多变化。改变一下[S1]I think a change might do you good.我想换换环境也许对你有好处。更换;替换[C][(+in/of)]零钱;找零[U]"Here's your change," said the saleswoman."这是你的找零,"女店员说道。【口】绝经(期);更年期[the S]3.modify vt.更改,修改We have to modify our plan a little bit.我们得对我们的计划稍加修改。缓和,减轻He has modified his demands.他已降低了他的要求。【语】修饰A noun sometimes modifies another noun.一个名词有时候修饰另一个名词。上面3个动词对应的名词为：alteration; changes; modification希望能帮到你，呵呵 ^_^

根据你的原文修改了下：The traditional way of treating guests in China requires not only a wide variety of foods, but also a great amount of them, so that guests cannot eat them up. The typical menu of Chinese banquet includes a number of cold dishes first, followed by hot dishes such as meat, poultry, vegetables and so on. At most banquets, the whole fish is considered to be the essential dish, unless seafood has already been served. Nowadays, Chinese like to combine western specialties with traditional Chinese dishes. It is not rare to see steak being served. Salad also becomes popular among Chinese people, though traditionally Chinese don't eat any food that is not cooked. There is usually at least one soup which is served at the beginning or at the end of the banquet. Desserts and fruit mark the end of the banquet.

用 alter

modify 就可以了. amend alter词太大,不符合一般说英语.

correct应该也可以吧。