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There are many different kind of musics,classic,electric,country and blue.Among all these genres,pop music is my favorite.I love pop music because they are always fresh and always new.Every time you get tired about one pop song,there will always be a new one waiting for you to listen.Also,I love dancing with pop music which makes me feel young.Whenever I feel upset or tired

you impressed us as responsible,kind,active,and sweet teacher,my kid likes your lesson a lot,hope you enjoy your work and life in China,thanks for your help.作文评语的写法一般要从学生习作的中心、选材、结构、表达、语言以及书写上作出中肯的评价。1.中心：有没有离题，按照题目要求来写。2.选材：①是否围绕中心。②是否真实，符合生活实际。③是否新鲜有趣。3.结构：①层次段落是否清楚。②过渡是否自然。③开头和结尾是否照应。4.表达：①记叙文有没有把事情讲清楚，写完整。写景文有没有把参观游览顺序写清楚。②详略得当，重要的人和事情详细写，不重要的地方简单写5.语言：①句子是否通顺、准确，病句少。②有没有运用比喻、排比、拟人、夸张等手法。③有没有运用成语、俗语、谚语、名人名言、诗歌等优美词句.④标点符号运用是否恰当。6.书写：①字体是否工整，错别字少。②卷面是否整洁干净，涂抹少

you impressed us as responsible, kind, active, and sweet teacher, my kid likes your lesson a lot, hope you enjoy your work and life in China, thanks for your help.