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Life is like sky. It may be sunny or rainy and it never lasts for a long time.So what can we do when we get in trouble? How to deal with it? First, when you find you made a mistake. Do not ask others for help at once.You should try to correct it by yourself, and this can make you grow and learn new theories and knowledge. Second, if you find it difficult for you to solve the problem, don't hesitate to turn to your friends for help. For them, helping you is an easy job. Don't feel shy and you can help others when they are in trouble. Everyone has different ways to solve problems.The theory depends on themselves. So, find a way which is suitable for you and keep a brave heart all the time.个别处修改怕有违您本意，还请见谅。祝学习愉快，学业有成！请您采纳~

My Favorite School Day I like Thursday very much, because my favorite subjects are on this day. The first class is Chinese. I like it, because it is very interesting . My Chinese teacher is Mrs Liu, who is very young. So I like her. English is the second class. In my opinion, the class is very difficult but funny, so I like it, too. At 8:50, it's time to have the math class. Howerer, I don't like it at all, because it is difficult for me. The fourth and fifth classes are Chinese and English. In the afternoon ,the first class is biology, which I don't like, too. It's too boring. After that, it is history I really like it, because I think I can learn more about the Chinese history from text book. And then, the PE class begins. It is my favorite subject, because it is very interesting and helps me relieve my stress.This is my favorite school day, which is meaningful and helpful. And I will try my best to study all the subjects well. 同学，请留意because的用法。。。你的用法是错误的。。

想要体高英语作文写作水平在原有的基础上进行修改提升是非常有效的办法，下面我就跟你们分享下怎么修改英语作文   一、英语作文的等级   四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分   三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6  处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分   二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分   一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分 二、英语作文修改案例   案例一：   A Trip to the Zoo   原稿：   Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo. I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos. That’s a interesting trip. I’ll never forget it. That’s  my trip.   修改后：   It was a sunny Sunday  After a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus. This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!   As soon as I got there,  I was attracted at once.  Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. How naughty they were! What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers. They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . I t came to my mind immiediatly.   Anyway, I had an interesting trip today . It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.   案例二：   My favourite season   原稿：   There are four seasons in a year. And my favourite season is summer. Although it’s very hot. I still love it .Because I can swim in the sea .And lie in sun . That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. That’s  very intersting. So I love summer. That’s my favourite season.   修改后   My favourite season   As is all know , there are four seasons. Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.   Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach  … How comfortable ! More importantly  I can eat delicious Icecream . Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father .   In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness .   三、英语作文修改的注意事项   1、整篇文章逻辑的修改.作文的目的是为了表达东西,所以首先要确保作文表达的内容是清楚并且符合逻辑的,如果段落之间都是矛盾的就说不过去了.   2、语法的修改篇章与段落的修改过后看句子的结构,说仔细了就是语法的修改.   3、还有就是单词拼写等小细节的修改了.

Life [is like the] sky. It may be sunny or rainy [but] it never [continues for a] long time.[我觉得前后没有因果关系]So [what] can we do when we [get into] a trouble? [or how to deal with it.我觉得有点多余] First,when you find you have [made] a mistake ,[do] not [ask others for help ] at once.You should try to [solve it] by yourself.It can make you grow [up] and learn new [theories] and knowledge . Second ,if you find it is difficult [for] you to solve the problem ,[don't] hesitate to turn to your friends for help.[It is a easy work that they do your a favour.这句有点别扭，不太明白意思]Don't feel shy and you can help others when they are in trouble . Everyone has different [ways] to solve [problems] .The [theory感觉这个词用在这意思不太通顺] [depends] on themselves .So,find a way which is [suitable] for you and keep a brave heart everytime 括号里是改的。水平有限，仅供参考！