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popo小婷婷

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楼主,素我直言,如果你的主管是一名外国人,特别是欧美人, 看到你这篇邮件会不知所云。甚至会看不懂这篇英语有点罗唆,而且没有主题,虽然是英语写的,但是中国式味道很浓。既然写英文邮件应该以英语方式书写,正如上两位朋友所说的,英语还是简洁直接一些较好。推荐用Sunrise0350的那篇文章,在以你自己的意思做一点修改即可

英语邮件申请培训

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yoyoyoyoyo224

to: all managers The purpose of this message is to confirm the nomination of English training for this sector and you took part in staff training school choice proposalSchool Background: 1 .*** advantages: regular foreign instructors, the curriculum flexible, within three months of freedom, not restrict classes, the city's four school sites Drawbacks: high costs To the crowd: the higher the level of demand for a variety of staff 2 .*** advantages: low prices, foreign instructors Disadvantages: a total of 48 hours, Timetable fixed, not for class, the only designated locations Try the crowd: basic and intermediate levels of staff Your suggestion; Start-level test results of the final level you expect to reach their English proficiency 1. 2. 3. Attention needs to be considered: 1. The provision of learning cycles are three months, a level 2. Costs will be assigned to various departments, can not exceed the beginning of the training department budget 3. I commend the staff of the study will 4. Need to work Managers will be invited to the final of the department staff, training school choice this week to five before the Human Resources Department, thank you for your cooperation

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小二郎爱学习

商务书函是要简介的....简单明了,开门见山...

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晨馨1205

因为对你的情况和工作环境,还有涉及到的人之间关系不是非常清楚,我只能按照自己的理解来写的MAIL供你参考.如果对方不是中国人的话,你可以开门见山告诉他你写信的目的。尽量写的简洁一些,用词稍微婉转一些即可。Title: application for a color design trainingDear JamesGood Afternoon!I would like to know if I could apply for a NCS color design training. The training will be held from March 4 to 8, five days and it costs 4800RMB.I feel that this training would be very useful to improve the quality and efficiency of my jobs.So, I hope you could kindly consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply at your convenience.RegardsElla

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束缚的漂流瓶

good afternoon是不需要的~~~~~I would like to know 也可以修改结尾也可以改成: I'm looking forward to your reply."at your convenience."可以不要,这样比较简洁 其他没细看~~~~~~~应该问题不大

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