to: all managers The purpose of this message is to confirm the nomination of English training for this sector and you took part in staff training school choice proposalSchool Background: 1 .*** advantages: regular foreign instructors, the curriculum flexible, within three months of freedom, not restrict classes, the city's four school sites Drawbacks: high costs To the crowd: the higher the level of demand for a variety of staff 2 .*** advantages: low prices, foreign instructors Disadvantages: a total of 48 hours, Timetable fixed, not for class, the only designated locations Try the crowd: basic and intermediate levels of staff Your suggestion; Start-level test results of the final level you expect to reach their English proficiency 1. 2. 3. Attention needs to be considered: 1. The provision of learning cycles are three months, a level 2. Costs will be assigned to various departments, can not exceed the beginning of the training department budget 3. I commend the staff of the study will 4. Need to work Managers will be invited to the final of the department staff, training school choice this week to five before the Human Resources Department, thank you for your cooperation
正式的邮件中不要用缩略词 don't要写成 do not.如果是免费午餐,建议说明。如：There will be a free lunch for you tomorrow.If you do not need lunch ,please contact me with e-mial before 9:30a.m. 5th June.2017.Look forward to your arrival。整体语法还行，就是有点Chinglish建议再写英文时可以参考下谷歌翻译的翻译结果。
