修改病句的英文

1.You will late for school again until you get up by 6.2.hou long will you get ready?one hour.3.when I broke the window it was yesterday 4.Autumn is the time tohavest crops.5.Social work has great help me with my job hunting.6.He has many books,they are widely read.7.The government has completed an investigation into average timeweek teenagers spend in different activities.8.Slaves recieved minimal amount of food.

您好，领学网为您解答：修改英语病句:1、“不一致”所谓不一致，包括主谓不一致、数的不一致、时态的不一致以及代词的不一致等。【1】Once Mary have money, she can do whatshe want to do.【解析】 Mary是第三人称单数，因而本句的have应该为has；同理want应该为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。【2】Water will boil at 100℃.【解析】表示客观真理的句子，应用一般现在是。【正确】 Waterboils at 100℃.2、修饰语错位【3】Shecan play basketball. She too can playfootball. 【解析】 too意为“也”时，一般位于句尾Shecan play basketball. She can play football，too. 3、句子不完整【4】Thereare many ways toknow the information. For example, by TV, newspaper, and so on. 【解析】本句后半部分For example, by TV,newspaper, and so on不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的短语，不能独立成句。【正确】Thereare many ways to know the information，for example, by TV,newspaper, and so on.4、悬垂修饰语【5】Atthe age of ten, his grandma died【解析】句中At the age of ten只指出10岁时祖母去世了，但没有说明是在“谁”10岁时祖母去世的。如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了。【正确】Whenhe was ten, his grandma died.5、词性误用【6】Shewent to asleep aftershe finished her homework.【解析】 asleep是形容词，这里误用作动词用。【正确】 Shewent to sleep after she finished her homework.6、指代不清【7】Wecanalso know the society by serving it yourself.【解析】句中人称代词we和反身代词指代yourself不一致【正确】Wecan also know the society by serving it ourselves.7、间断句子【8】It’simportant for us we know lots of information.【解 析】这个句子包含两个完整的意思：It’simportant for us 以及Weknow lots of information.简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。【正 确】 It’simportant for us to know lots ofinformation.8、措辞问题【9】He is either too tall or too short【解 析】该句是把neither…nor…（既不……也不……）误作either…or…了，因为说一个人的个子时，不能说“或高或矮”，而应是“既不太高也不太矮”。【正 确】 He is neither too tall nor too short.9、累赘【10】Exceptthe fact that she is lazy, I like her.【解 析】本句的that she is lazy是同位语从句，按照“能用词组的不用从句”的原则进行修改。【正 确】Excepther laziness, I like her.10、不连贯【11】Happiness,it is the most important things in the world.【解 析】Happiness与逗号后的it不连贯，另外， it与things在数上也不一致。【正 确】 Happinessis the most important thing in the world.11、综合性语言错误【12】Today,timeto everybody is very important, our’s study work. 【解 析】这句话表达不清，后半句与前面在逻辑上、含义上很难衔接在一起。【正 确】Today,timeis very important to everyone’s work and study.望采纳！

whenwegottohis home,wefoundhimin hishouse.到他家。。。在他的房间里。首先是语言逻辑乱。这样一调整OK。我想你能看明白。

1. a 改成an2. spends改成takes3. hope改成wish4. That room is smaller than that one.5. closedinterested改成interesting

read应该改为reading，likedoing是固定用法要记住啊 希望对你有帮助，如果满意请采纳吧，谢谢

您要表达的意思是:他们想去伦敦,但是他们不确定(还在犹豫).上边这句话中主句和从句时态不一致要是现在时都是现在时要是过去时都是过去时,所以这句话应该这么说TheymaygotoLondon,buttheyarenotcertain.

1.until->unless2.hou->How soon3.when->that4.去掉crops5.great->greatly6.they->which7.spend in different activities->spend in in different activities8.amount->amountsor minimal amount of food->a minimal amount of food