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2.Many of his customers come back three or four times over the summer3.If you want to excel in athletics,you should watch out for your diet4.It's hard for us to pay for health insurance,but we don't dare to go without it5.To fix an appointment and know more about me and my job, call the telephone number (213)748-76906.To know your company in detail, have the meetings and phone conversations made.7.The girl who had danced gracefully entered the room8.I have a strong willingness to learn more about your accompany9.In 2009, revenues were 30.9 billion,and/while net income was 6.82 billion.10.My job includes checking the inventory,initializing the orders,and calling for the supplies.

sorry about that night.i know i hurt you.i can't leave you .i've tried to forget you .but i failed .nobody can tell me why .i think it's just beause i really love you and care about you .after last night.i begin to miss you .miss you everytime when i was working and walking.i don't know what to say .but sorry .sometimes i feel i'm really a fool.the poor English.and i really want to slap my face .that make you so sad.i still love you so much.that time .you said i made you cry.my heart is so painful.i just can't speak it out.so soryy.i love you .i'm always waiting for you to come back.come back to me again.i want you stay at my side all time.i swear.i would like to embrace you tightly.console you when you sad .and smile when you happy.i have pain in my heart.when i tryp this message.please.ing.forgive me .i never do that again.Ing.i miss you .

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第一句： 如果是问句，那么就该用问号来结尾，而且，通常都是用some，而不是any的；并且，提问方式有2种：1. Do you have got some money? 2. Have you got some money? 第二句： 连个主语都没有。造成句意无法明确，是一句无论是语法上，还是表达上都有严重问题的句子。 如果说，第二句和第一句是相互关联的、存在连续表达意思的关系，那么应该将第二句改成：1. Owning a lot of money doesn't mean that you are successful.（有一大笔钱不代表你是个成功的人士。）2. It doesn't mean you are successful.