shally9073
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need. Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly. However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain
专业的吃货一枚
网络购物：online shoppingwith the development of our ecnomic,online shopping has become more and more common.网络购物的好处：convenient ， save time坏处：things we buy from the Internet may be of bad quality总结：in my opinoin...
candy晓琳
第一段 with the development of science and technology ,more and more people begin to shop online. Of course ,it has many advantanges. First. it is convenient ,,,,, Second it can save more time,,,,, However it also has some disadvantages. We can not see ,,,in person. What we buy may not be the same as we see on the computer. 二段 In my opinion, we should ,,,.
天堂猫ivy
写作思路及要点：审清题目，确定中心，选择材料。
Nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most popular ways of shopping. Going out shopping has become a kind of leisure walk.
如今，网购已经成为人们的.热门购物方式之一，出门购物已经成为一种休闲时的散步。
There are many advantages of online shopping. It can "go shopping" at home, ordering is not limited by time and place.
网购的优点有很多。它可以在家“逛商店”，订货不受时间、地点的限制。
It gets a lot of commodity information and can buy goods that are not available locally. It can save time and effort from ordering, buying goods to goods door-to-door without visiting the scene.
它获得较大量的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。它从订货、买货到货物上门无需亲临现场，既省时又省力。
To sum up, it can be seen that online shopping breaks through the barriers of traditional business, and has great attraction and influence on consumers, enterprises and the market. In the new economic era, it is undoubtedly an ideal mode to achieve "multi win" effect.
综上可以看出，网上购物突破了传统商务的障碍，无论对消费者、企业还是市场都有着巨大的吸引力和影响力，在新经济时期无疑是达到“多赢”效果的理想模式。
However, online shopping has many disadvantages. Online shopping can only be seen photos, to the goods really arrive in the hand, will feel different from the physical, which is not as good as in the mall to buy at ease. Network payment is not secure, may be peeping, password stolen.
但是，网购还有许多缺点。网购只能是看到照片，到货物真的到达手里，会感觉和实物有不一样，这就不如在商场里买到的放心。网络支付不安全，可能被偷窥，密码被盗。
And the delivery is too slow. Although the speed of EMS is faster than that of the past, buyers still have to wait for a few days. Online shopping also can't experience the leisure of shopping and chatting with relatives and friends.
而且收货太慢，尽管现在EMS的速度已经比以前的邮寄快了不知多少倍，毕竟买家还是要等上几天。网购也不能和亲戚朋友一起体会逛街闲聊的悠闲。
I don't think online shopping is better than shopping. We should reduce or strengthen the security of online shopping.
我认为网购不比逛街好，应该减少网购或加强网购的安全性。
