那些年喜帖街
Lora wants to get a work during the summer vacation.Because he thinks it's a good idea to get more social experience.However,his parents don't allow him to do so,and this made him very upset.In his parets' opion,he' too young to work outside,and sometimes he may get into trouble.His parents just worry about this. I think that Lora could have a talk with his parents,and make his parents believe his social ability.He could also learn more skills to be excellent enough,so that he can make great progress from them.(英文不是很好。。。）
白树dodo
This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar. At the beginning, I couldn't do well at all often made mistakes. I was very low-spirited,father mother encouraged me a lot. So I began to try my best. Gradually, I could do a very good job. I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time. I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation. I believe I can do better next time.这个暑假我在一个餐吧里得到了一个兼职。开始，我经常出错做不好工作。我有点意志有点消沉，父亲母亲都鼓励我。所以我尽力做到最好。渐渐的，我可以把工作做得很好。当我收到工资我感到很开心。我已经有信心在这个寒假找到另外的兼职了。我相信下次我可以做得更好。
耗子爱熊猫
This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar. At the beginning, I couldn't do well at all often made mistakes. I was very low-spirited,father mother encouraged me a lot. So I began to try my best. Gradually, I could do a very good job. I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time. I这个暑假我在一个快餐店找到一份兼职工作。一开始，我做不好，在所有经常犯错误。我是很低的，爸爸妈妈鼓励我很多。所以我开始尝试我最好的。渐渐地，我可以做一个非常好的工作。当我第一次收到我的报酬时，我感到非常激动。我已经决定在这个寒假里找一份兼职工作。我相信我下次能做得更好。
七月小太阳
往日放了学，都是妈妈早就给我们做好了饭菜，我和爸爸还有奶奶一起吃。可是今天放了学，看到身体不灵便的奶奶在择菜，锅是冷的，馒头是凉的。这时爸爸也下班回家了，唯独不见妈妈。一向准时做饭的妈妈，今天怎么失踪了呢？给她打手机，手机关机了。到底怎么回事呢？爸爸只好带着我去妈妈的劳动地点——我家的蔬菜大棚去寻找。到了田野里，正是中午，处处静悄悄的，四处没有一个人，只有风吹着大棚的塑料布瑟瑟抖动，妈妈的三轮车也不在这里。“妈妈——”我大声呼唤着，可是没有回音。正在我和爸爸一筹莫展的时候，远方的路上开来一辆三轮车，上面一个熟悉的身影，是妈妈！我高兴的跳了起来。一会儿，妈妈来到了我们身边，只见他满脸的汗水，脏兮兮的手上还粘着菜叶。“你干什么去了？”爸爸心疼中带着埋怨。“一位老太太走到这里，自行车坏了，踏实张家庄人，我连人带车把她送了回家。”妈妈说着，捋了捋凌乱的头发。哦，这就是妈妈失踪的奥秘啊！我更加爱我的妈妈了。
美妮宝贝
This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar. At the beginning, I couldn't do well at all often made mistakes. I was very low-spirited,father mother encouraged me a lot. So I began to try my best. Gradually, I could do a very good job. I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time. I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation. I believe I can do better next time.今年暑假我在一家小吃店找到了一份兼职工作。一开始，我做得不好，经常犯错误。我很消沉，爸爸妈妈给了我很多鼓励。所以我开始尽我最大的努力。渐渐地，我可以把工作做得很好。当我第一次收到工资时，我感到非常兴奋。我已经下定决心在这个寒假里再找一份兼职工作。我相信下次我能做得更好。
Cathyshenzhen
写作思路：可以写自己在打bai工的过程中学到了什么道理，比如懂得与陌生人打交道，第一次体会到生活的巨大压力等等。
正文：
Nearly two months of working time let me understand a lot of truth, and brought endless fun to my study life, can learn knowledge that books can't learn.
近乎两个多月的打工岁月让我明白了很多道理，并且给我的学习生活带来了无穷的乐趣，能够学习到书本上学不到的知识。
ard conditions, plain food and hot sun make me tired all day. I have thought of giving up countless times, but I think this is the first time in my life to earn money.
艰苦的条件，平淡的饭菜，火辣的太阳让我整天身心疲惫，我曾经无数次的想到过放弃，但想着这是我人生第一次打工挣钱。
Although my skin was tanned and my sweat was solidified, my waist was straight and energetic, and I knew how to deal with strangers better, and the red hundred yuan bill was shining in my hands.
即将捞到的第一桶金，我还是咬紧牙关冲了过去，紧锣密鼓的一个月终于过去，尽管我的皮肤被晒黑，汗水被凝固，但我的腰板笔直，精神焕发，更懂得与陌生人打交道了，并且红灿灿的百元 大钞在我手中熠熠生辉。
扩展资料
英语作文想写好作文，必须具备扎实的基本功，作文的基本功主要体现在词、句、段三个方面。
单词方面，积累单词，扩大词汇量，弄清词的确切用法及相似词的用法区别，以及很多固定短语、习语的用法，要准确地表达想要表达的意思。
句子方面，注意一些常用的句式，平时看到比较好用的句式要记下来，多模仿，还要在写文章时注意长短句的结合。
段落方面，注意整篇文章的整体布局，要从整体上把握每段的中心思想，避免偏题、走题。
提高写作水平不是一朝一夕所能完成的，最重要的是养成好的学习习惯，平时注意多积累，勤动笔、多思考，潜移默化中写作水平便会不断提高。
