小红红黑黑
1.第二句.I'd like to（be）your 加be解析：to这里是不定式符号，后加动词原型2. 第三行 where改成which解析：where是地点副词不可做关系代词，且有逗号，是由which引导的非限定性定语从句（where＝in which）3.第四行subject（s）加s解析：quite a few＝many 许多，复数4. I use to 改成I used to解析：uesd to do sth 过去常常做某事，固定用法5.I am interesting 改成I am interested解析：interested主语为人，interesting主语为物6.what(is) your favourite解析：没有谓语，需加be动词7. hear of you 改成hear from解析：hear from译为“收到...的来信”，固定用法其他还在找
TracyJunli
was改为is,what改为which,put finishing改为finish,task 改为tasks,but改为and,find改为finding,this改为these,confident改为confidence
楠木青城……
1.to而不是inthecoast.2.caught拼写.3.jumped4.spending5.distance.6.7.high8.to改为at.9.he改为she.10.去掉on
咖啡不加糖的娟
1.第一句were改成are。讲述现在发生的动作2.第二句改为aswellas,他们在城市中有很多机会也有很多困难asgoodas是“像……一样“或”像……一样好“的意思。.AaswellasB.A.B也一样3.第三句opportunity改成复数opportunities。4.第四句brighter前面加个a。goodeducation那里没错，但感觉句意上来说bettereducation可能更好5.第六句affordtolive6.第七句helpthem7.最后一句happily
提琴小13
1 the 改为a2 week 改为 weeks3 improved 前加 had4.get familiar to改为 get familiar with5.we trained 中间加 were6 ended改为 finished 7 but改为 and楼主哪个不明白可以问我
Jingelababy今
One afternoon a girl set out in the coast in a small （from the coast)boat and caught in a storm. Towards evening. The boat (was caught 用被动语态 )struck a rock and the girl jumps into the sea. Then she （jumped 过去时）swam to the shore after spend the whole night in the （spending 介词后用动名词）water. During that time she covered the distance of eight （during that night） miles. Early next morning, she saw a light behind. She （the next 表示顺序的不定词前用定冠词）knew she was near the shore because the light was highly （high 用形容词作表语） up on the cliffs. On arriving to the shore, the girl struggled（arriving at）up the cliff towards the lingt she had seen. When he woke ( up to )up a day later on, she found herself in hospital. ( on 多余，删掉）
樽品爱榴莲
1. I'd like to be your pen friend2. which is the capital of China3. quite a few subjects4. I used to play pingpong5. I am interested in football6. what's your favourite sport?7. hear from you soon只能改七个.....
