冬冻咚洞
答It's terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech, and your poster is well done as well. however, you need to make more eye contact with the audience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation. I have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language, which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury. Moreover, I really hope you can put more passion into the speech and try to enrich it with more facial expression, then surely your speech would be fabulous.演讲中没有语法错误，尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好，他演讲的开头很好，而且很幽默，演讲有激情，并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言your grammar is ok. It's worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, furthermore, he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech, and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.
涅槃0531
太多了,怎么说都行吧...给你3个参考.1)wao,thatisanimpressivespeach.Welldone!Nowthen,nextupis...--非常令人印象深刻的演讲,干得好.那接下来的一位是...(2)Mmm,verygood,thoughtprovokingIhavetosay.I'msuretheaudienceagreeswithme.--恩,我必须说你的演讲很深刻.我肯定在台下的观众也会这么觉得.(3)Youmadesomeinterestingpointsthere.Perhapsothersdon'tagree,butilikedthewayyoumadethisspeachoutsidethebox.--你在你的演讲里提出了不少有趣的想法.或许不是每个人都同意你的观点,但我很喜欢你跳出传统框架的演讲.
新月之垣
其实如果你只想要应付的话 你就可以说Your speech is great, but is still a lack of self-confidence.你的演讲很棒，但还是缺乏自信You sound good, but not enough solid basic skills.你的声音不错，但是基本功不够扎实。Your language is very fluent, but speech is not enough deep understanding of the content你的语言很流畅，但对于演讲内容的理解还不够深刻。The language of your organization, the voices are very good, also very confident, I really like你的语言组织，声音都很不错，也很有自信，我很喜欢一般后面可以加一句I hope you continue to work希望你继续努力或者I look forward to your next performance 我期待你下一次的表现
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