混世金粉
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to tell you something about the recording pen. I bought it from your website several days ago. However, there seems to be something wrong with it . First , the voice isn’t so clear as you claimed. Second, it’s not easy to operate, which has caused me much trouble. What I expect is a human-friendlyone. Third ,it often breaks down, while a recording pen at such a price shouldn’t have had so many problems.Due to its poor quality and much inconvenience it has caused, I wonder whether you can do something about it, I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back .I’ll sent it back to you as Return the money to me. If it can’t be helped, I wish you could have it repaired or changed.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua
壹只头俩只脑
自己写的,分享给你, Dear manager, I am writing to you for the digital recording pen which I bought from your shop.I would like to return it and request for a full refund.Last week,I bought a digital recording pen from your store.But when I checked it by myself at home,unfortunately,I found that there's something wrong with it.The voices recorded by your recording pen are not clearly.Then I ran to your shop and asked for help.What’s worse,your shop assistant told me that’s because the recording environment was noisy and they refused to change a new one or refund.So I had to ask an expert to testify it.The test report shows that the quality of the recording pen is below-average,so I have to write this letter to you and ask you for your response. I am looking forward to your prompt reply.Thanks for your consideration! Yours,XXX 如有不明白的,欢迎随时提问. 天天开心!
无忧快乐起
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to request for a full refund of the camera-Canon650D I phurchased on Nov 12, 2012 from the XX District Branch Store. (交待写信目的，购买的商品型号，时间，地点)The camera was great when you showed to me in your store, but the one I received was scratched on the lens with a broken shouler strap. What's worst, the camera cannot work as the screen is blur and blue. Besides, the extra battery You shop promised free is not inside the package. (点明退货原因,镜头刮花，肩带破损，屏幕蓝点)I really like your great service in the store, but the goods is a little lower than my expectation. (先给糖后打一棒子，英语公关类书写中也有委婉语这一要求）You have mentioned a 7-day validity for exchanging or refund unqulified quality, so I would appreciate it if You Store could offer me a refund.（再一次理直气壮点明原因）I am looking forward to your prompt reply.Thanks!Yours Sincerely,XX英语公关文写作目的在于沟通，最和谐的方式达到自己的要求。切忌言辞粗暴，语气不善，这道理跟在中国你跟人要求某事一样，你若一味说人不好，对方也不会如你所愿。作为参考咯
樱花卫厨ks
dear manager， as a customer，i have some suggestions for your sale。 last month，i bought a digital camera from your store，but after i check it by myself at home，unfortunately，i found that there is something wrong，firstly，the photos taken by it is not very clearly。then i ran to the salesshop for mending，but they refused me。so，i had to ask an expert to testify it，later on，they told me the quality of the quality of the camera is below-average，so i had to write this letter to you and ask you for help，please respond me as soon as possible ，thank you！ Li Hua采纳吧，，打的累死了，呜呜。。。
