落叶无声2015
我的爱好我有许多爱好，弹琴、画画、写作……但我最喜欢看书，人人都管叫我“小书迷”。我之所以爱看书，是有原因的，因为书是人类进步的阶梯，是精神的粮食，是终身的伴侣，也是我最真挚的朋友。我家里有很多书。在我家书房的三个大书柜里、我房间的床头上、书桌上都摆满了书，每一本书都是我和爸爸精心挑选的。书就像一位博学多才的老师，带我徜徉知识的海洋，教给我用之不竭的知识。有一次我正在津津有味地看着世界上最为杰出的科幻小说家非利普·迪克的《火星人的时光倒转》，这部作品幽默、痛苦、令人敬畏，带给我巨大的心灵震撼；我仿佛身临其境，和书中的主人公一起冒险、逃亡、呐喊。正当我看得入神时，妈妈大喊一声：“开饭了！”我口口声声地回答：“来了，来了，请等一下。”但我还无法回过神来，仍然梦一般地沉浸在这本奇妙的书的境界里，还在聚精会神地看书，没挪一寸地方。妈妈又喊了一声，可这回我却爱理不理的。妈妈推开门，怒气冲冲地走进来，眼神简直可以杀死几只蚊子，我“哇噻”大叫，吓了妈妈一大跳。我激动地说：“火星人终于发现时光倒转的运行规律，这位伟大的英雄，这位救世主，我太敬仰他了……”妈妈打断了我的话，冲我大吼，像一只发怒的豹子，红着眼睛，呲牙咧嘴，说：“够了，书呆子，马上给我洗手吃饭，否则你准备跟你的书宝贝说再见吧。”我吓呆了，正想要同她反驳，但是，经验告诉我——小孩在大人面前总是错的，特别是在大人们认为有理的时候。我一声不吭地洗手吃饭：我可不想她把我的书从楼上扔下去。你，亲爱的朋友——书，谢谢你伴我度过成长的每一天，陪我哭泣，陪我忧愁，陪我微笑……谢谢你带给了我许多快乐。当我不开心时，总要翻翻书，这样什么不开心的事都会抛在脑后，烟消云散了。书，就像一盏明亮的路灯，照亮了我的童年，点亮了我的人生，让我在人生道路上小心行走，并且从哪摔倒就从哪里爬起来。读书能够陶冶人的情操，给人带来快乐和知识，多读书能为我们的未来打下坚固的基础。朋友，爱书吧！作文吧
宜木构思家具
My Brother I have a brother. He is four years older than me. Now he is fifteen years old, and he is a student of Grade Nine. He is tall and handsome. His classmates like playing with him. He works hard in study. His teachers speak highly of him. Besides, basketball and running are his favorites. He is good at sports. He cares much about me. When I meet difficulties in study, he always helps me. I love my brother.
西湖草莓
My Brother我的哥哥My brother is a bookworm. He is a top student.我哥哥是个书迷，他是一名尖子生。He hardly ever goes out to play in a year.One day we had a holiday, and I asked him to play with me. But he said he would never left his desk.He didn't promise to play with me until I cried.一年中他几乎很少出去玩。有一天放假，我叫哥哥跟我一起玩，可是他说他不愿离开他的书桌。直到我哭了他才答应和我玩。We started playing "seek and hide". I hid behind a cupboard.I waited for a while, but he didn't appear.When I ran out, to my surprise, I found him reading.As he was looking for me, he happened to find a book.That was why he forgot playing the game.我们开始玩“捉迷藏”游戏。 我藏在一个柜子后面。但我等了一会儿也不见他出现。我跑出来时，大吃一惊，我发现他正在看书。当他在找我时，碰巧发现了一本书。那就是为什么他把做游戏的事忘了。This is my brother-cute,hardworking and bright.
淇淇爱添添
1. Do you know him ? 你知道他吗？ No，but I know about him. 不，但是我听说过他。 选D know 知道 了解 know about 仅仅是知道 听说过2. 应该用except except 是不包括在内的 except him 就是他没去，别人都去了 besides 是包括在内的 besides him 就是除了他去 ，别人也去了 beside 是在……旁边 except for 是 美中不足 Your compositon is really good, except for some spelling mistakes. 你的作文很好，除了一点拼写错误
