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In 2010, in my 10 years old when I with his family came to Tibet, set foot on this from in recent days, the holy land. First came to Tibet, because they do not adapt to high altitude environment, so immediately the plateau reaction, well through medication and rest, after a few days back, then down a few days, we went to the Nam Co Lake, enjoy the unique beauty of plateau lakes . We also went to visit in Lhasa in the world the highest elevation of the palace Fort type buildings Potala Palace. Red and white walls, magnificent interior, they all bring me shock. In Tibet over the past few days, I feel the my heart has been purified.

I am determined to go to Tibet once in my life.

I hope to travel to Tibet in the summer vacation.

Summer holiday is coming. I will go to Tibet with my parents.As you know, Tibet is the largest province in western China and there are many famous interesting places, such as the Potala Palace and so on. I am anxious to go to the Potala Palace .which is one of the greatest wonders of the world. I'm sure great changes must have taken place in Tibet. I can't wait.

I must visit Tibet once in my lifetime

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