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Dear Editor,
I am a Senior Three student.Recently we have carried out a survey—“To whom do you go when in trouble?” The main findings are as follows.
61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble and want to confide, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other.Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to.They suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences.Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all.They say that their troubles are none of others’ business.Others find it hard to converse with others.
In my opinion , some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Ming
Dear editor，
I’m whiting to you to tell you something bad in my hometown ,they are about different kinds of pellution.
There are different kinds of pollution in my homtown .such as water pollution and nosie pollution.they are very terrible and make us fell uncomfultable and unpleasant.
A few years ago we could see green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere.But now everything has changed.We can’t see the beautiful things. The environment diseases.
I want to change the all ,but I am not able to do it..So I write to you .Please help me.
Yours,
Rick.
Dear editor，
Nowadays, there are more and more people planning to buy their own cars. The following is my opinions regarding this issue.
First of all, car provide us with great convenience so that people can drive every where they want and save a lot of time. Car is also a very suitable transportation tool for travel. Furthermore, driving car is much safer than riding bicycles.
On the other hand, the increasing number of personal cars causes severe problems, such as air pollution, traffic congestion and more accidents.
Therefore, I suggest that maybe the government can control the number of cars by regulations.
Yours truly,
Zhang Wei
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