张小凡09
楼主你写的好Chinglish哦。偶帮你全修改过了，希望能帮助你。WelcometoPutian.ItislocatedatthecenteroftheFujianprovincewhichisabeautifulcitywithoverthreemillionpeople.IhaveheardfromSamthatitspopulationismorethantheDallas`inUS.However,PutiancanonlybecalledasmallcityinChinabecausetherearemanycitieswhicharemuchbiggerthanit.PutianissimilartoanyothercitiesinChinabecausemoreandmorelargemodernbuildingsarebeingbuilt.Also,ithasmanynaturalandculturalsceneries.Firstly,allthenewcomersshouldvisittheMeizhouislandwhichisthehometownoftheseagoddessMazu.TherearealsomanybeautifultemplesforMazu.ThisisthestatueofMazuanditis14matterstall.Thatisanendlessexpenseofgoldenbeaches.Lastterm,allofourclassmateswentthere.Wechasedeachotheronthebeachandplayedwiththeseawater.Wehadagoodtime.
叶子晓桐
修改什么？一般文字，图画可以用FIX,RECTIFY，REVISE，MODIFY.如果是正式的文案，法律等等，应该是AMEND如果你的“修改”有更换之意，则应该用CHANGE一般来讲，用MODIFY比较普遍，FIX比较口语，AMEND比较正式
