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My girl friend我的女友I hesitate for a moment after writing down the title of this article, because I've no idea where to start this story.My girl friend definitely can not be described by only a few words.Some times she turns to me and asks "Why do you love me?"I am always stuck at that moment and then after a minute or two utter a few words "Because you're so good."I know my vague answer never satisfies her.But how can I reply otherwise?我犹豫了片刻后,写下这篇文章的标题,因为我不知道这个故事从哪里开始写。我的女朋友肯定不能用几句话就描述完的。有时她会转向我问:“你为什么爱我?”我总是停留在那一刻,然后一两分钟后说了几个字“因为你太好了。”我知道我含糊的回答从来没有满足她。但是,不然要我怎么回答呢?Yes, she's so good.There're numerous examples I can cite to illustrate her tenderness, delicacy, warmth and her genuine love for me.A call on the cold winter night, a surprising birthday gift, a pair of gloves that warm up not only my hands, so many times has my heart melted into a sentiment called "being moved".是的,她真的很好。有许多例子可以用来说明她的温柔,细腻,温暖和她对我真挚的爱。在寒冷的冬天的晚上,一个电话,一个令人惊喜的生日礼物,一副手套不仅把我的手暖和起来,而且经常把我的心融化成一种叫“感动”的情感。I'm not a good tempered guy.However, my girlfriend never loses her temper whenever I am not in a good mood or even say sharp words to her.At that time, she'd look at me with great care and touch my hands with hers to calm me down.That's her graceful manner to show her deepest concern.我不是一个好脾气的人。然而,在我心情不好或是责备她的时候,我的女朋友从不发脾气。在那个时候,她看着我,小心翼翼地用她的手触摸我的我平静下来。那是她优雅的举止来表达她深切的关心。I have never written a love letter to her though I've received many from my dearest girlfriend.It's not that I'm unwilling to compose one, but that I find it impossible to convey my feelings to her with written words.We've been in love for more than one year.But if once more asked to give reasons why I love her, I guess I'd still say because she's so good.虽然我从未写过情书给她,但我已经收到很多来自我最亲爱的女朋友的信。并不是我不想写,只是我无法用字来表达我的感情。我们已经相爱超过一年了。但如果要再次说出我爱她原因,我想我会说,因为她是那么的好。I can't further this generalized answer into details because it takes me lifetime to do so.对于这个广义的回答,我不能做深入详细的回答,因为它需要我花一辈子的时间去理解。

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KauluwehiS

Once upon a time there was a dear little girl who was loved by every one who looked at her,but most of all by her grandmother,and there was nothing that she would not have given to the child.Once she gave her a little cap of red velvet,which suited her so well that she would never wear anything else.So she was always called little red-cap.One day her mother said to her,come,little red-cap,here is a piece of cake and a bottle of wine.Take them to your grandmother,she is ill and weak,and they will do her good.Set out before it gets hot,and when you are going,walk nicely and quietly and do not run off the path,or you may fall and break the bottle,and then your grandmother will get nothing.And when you go into her room,don't forget to say,good-morning,and don't peep into every corner before you do it.I will take great care,said little red-cap to her mother,and gave her hand on it.The grandmother lived out in the wood,half a league from the village,and just as little red-cap entered the wood,a wolf met her.Red-cap did not know what a wicked creature he was,and was not at all afraid of him."Good-day,little red-cap," said he."Thank you kindly,wolf." "Whither away so early,little red-cap?" "To my grandmother's." "What have you got in your apron?" "Cake and wine.Yesterday was baking-day,so poor sick grandmother is to have something good,to make her stronger." "Where does your grandmother live,little red-cap?" "A good quarter of a league farther on in the wood.Her house stands under the three large oak-trees,the nut-trees are just below.You surely must know it," replied little red-cap.The wolf thought to himself,what a tender young creature.What a nice plump mouthful,she will be better to eat than the old woman.I must act craftily,so as to catch both.So he walked for a short time by the side of little red-cap,and then he said,"see little red-cap,how pretty the flowers are about here.Why do you not look round.I believe,too,that you do not hear how sweetly the little birds are singing.You walk gravely along as if you were going to school,while everything else out here in the wood is merry." Little red-cap raised her eyes,and when she saw the sunbeams dancing here and there through the trees,and pretty flowers growing everywhere,she thought,suppose I take grandmother a fresh nosegay.That would please her too.It is so early in the day that I shall still get there in good time.And so she ran from the path into the wood to look for flowers.And whenever she had picked one,she fancied that she saw a still prettier one farther on,and ran after it,and so got deeper and deeper into the wood.Meanwhile the wolf ran straight to the grandmother's house and knocked at the door."Who is there?" "Little red-cap," replied the wolf."She is bringing cake and wine.Open the door." "Lift the latch," called out the grandmother,"I am too weak,and cannot get up." The wolf lifted the latch,the door sprang open,and without saying a word he went straight to the grandmother's bed,and devoured her.Then he put on her clothes,dressed himself in her cap,laid himself in bed and drew the curtains.Little red-cap,however,had been running about picking flowers,and when she had gathered so many that she could carry no more,she remembered her grandmother,and set out on the way to her.She was surprised to find the cottage-door standing open,and when she went into the room,she had such a strange feeling that she said to herself,oh dear,how uneasy I feel to-day,and at other times I like being with grandmother so much.She called out,"good morning," but received no answer.So she went to the bed and drew back the curtains.There lay her grandmother with her cap pulled far over her face,and looking very strange."Oh,grandmother," she said,"what big ears you have." "The better to hear you with,my child," was the reply."But,grandmother,what big eyes you have," she said."The better to see you with," my dear."But,grandmother,what large hands you have." "The better to hug you with." "Oh,but,grandmother,what a terrible big mouth you have." "The better to eat you with." And scarcely had the wolf said this,than with one bound he was out of bed and swallowed up red-cap.When the wolf had appeased his appetite,he lay down again in the bed,fell asleep and began to snore very loud.The huntsman was just passing the house,and thought to himself,how the old woman is snoring.I must just see if she wants anything.So he went into the room,and when he came to the bed,he saw that the wolf was lying in it.Do I find you here,you old sinner,said he.I have long sought you.Then just as he was going to fire at him,it occurred to him that the wolf might have devoured the grandmother,and that she might still be saved,so he did not fire,but took a pair of scissors,and began to cut open the stomach of the sleeping wolf.When he had made two snips,he saw the little red-cap shining,and then he made two snips more,and the little girl sprang out,crying,ah,how frightened I have been.How dark it was inside the wolf.And after that the aged grandmother came out alive also,but scarcely able to breathe.Red-cap,however,quickly fetched great stones with which they filled the wolf's belly,and when he awoke,he wanted to run away,but the stones were so heavy that he collapsed at once,and fell dead.Then all three were delighted.The huntsman drew off the wolf's skin and went home with it.The grandmother ate the cake and drank the wine which red-cap had brought,and revived,but red-cap thought to herself,as long as I live,I will never by myself leave the path,to run into the wood,when my mother has forbidden me to do so.It is also related that once when red-cap was again taking cakes to the old grandmother,another wolf spoke to her,and tried to entice her from the path.Red-cap,however,was on her guard,and went straight forward on her way,and told her grandmother that she had met the wolf,and that he had said good-morning to her,but with such a wicked look in his eyes,that if they had not been on the public road she was certain he would have eaten her up.Well,said the grandmother,we will shut the door,that he may not come in.Soon afterwards the wolf knocked,and cried,open the door,grandmother,I am little red-cap,and am bringing you some cakes.But they did not speak,or open the door,so the grey-beard stole twice or thrice round the house,and at last jumped on the roof,intending to wait until red-cap went home in the evening,and then to steal after her and devour her in the darkness.But the grandmother saw what was in his thoughts.In front of the house was a great stone trough,so she said to the child,take the pail,red-cap.I made some sausages yesterday,so carry the water in which I boiled them to the trough.Red-cap carried until the great trough was quite full.Then the smell of the sausages reached the wolf,and he sniffed and peeped down,and at last stretched out his neck so far that he could no longer keep his footing and began to slip,and slipped down from the roof straight into the great trough,and was drowned.But red-cap went joyously home,and no one ever did anything to harm her again.

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墨亦成诗

很好~!(这是什么东东???)

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