MrcuriosityZ
Write an essay about how to learn English well composition!Five steps1 hear at ordinary times in the not disturb others under the condition of normal rest can open reread machine, broadcasting English dialogue or some English tapes. See hope English."Have a chance to speak English, right and wrong doesn't matter, only said to timely find out problems.3 back classical English articles and poems is the best recite object, back more natural had the sense of language and a certain topic.4 write to learn English grammar and vocabulary used you write English composition, make you to the knowledge of more firm.5 practice learn English the most primary purpose is to rely on high scores, so do more practice is also indispensable.Hope your English can be more on a floor.Answerer: snow outside the window - apprentice magicAbove translation!
zzyunicorn
修改病句：1、Tom's child is （a) girl and Micky's child is (a) boy 2、they met each other at(in) a party 3、He can bungee jump and ride a horse ，can后面跟的是动词，而bungee jump 是名词是蹦极的意思，建议这句可改成：He likes bungee jump and riding a horse. like既可以跟动词又可以跟名词。 4、He also has a gift for sport（sports).后面有讲到好几种体育 5、On the contrary,however, Micky's girl is short,slim,shy,sensitive . On the contrary是“相反地”的意思，however是“然而，可是”的意思，两个意思其实是差不多的，在这里重复了，取一个就行了，建议用On the contrary，因为however在平常文章中用的比较多，英语作文的话单词还是相对新颖的好。 6、She is nether (neither) outgoing nor lively. 7、she can write novels and poem (poems) 8、she is a（an) excellent daughter个人建议：大体看下来，行文还算流畅，有些单词、短语用的比较好的，但是重复的单词太多，少用and这个单词，看上去会更加好。用的最多就是and这个词，有些地方可以换掉，比如：One day, they met each other at a party and they started talking about their children可换成One day, they met each other at a party ，then they started talking about their children。 其次用的最多是can这个词，一句话连着读有很多个and和can，He can bungee jump and ride a horse, and he can play several ball games such as basketball,tennis,volleyball and baseball，可换成：Ordinarily(平时） he likes bungee jump and riding a horse.He also can play several ball games such as basketball,tennis,volleyball and baseball. have the talent to也是“有天赋”的意思，可以一个用have the talent to，另一个用have a gift for，这样可能会更好哦~建议：一篇文章中同个单词出现的次数不要太多哦；同个意思的单词，最好不要用大家都常用的 单词，这样给老师的印象会深刻点，分数会高点，所以扩充词汇量是必须的！ 希望对你有帮助哦~ 加油！（PS：修改病句不敢保证百分百修改正确，但保证大部分都修改对的哦~ 自我感觉给你评的还不错，嘻嘻~~ 我打得很辛苦地，真的。。。。）
妞妞宝贝814
Tom and Micky were classmates twenty years ago. Now they are both married and both of them have a child.Tom's child is (a) girl and Micky's child is (a) boy. They like their children very much.One day, they met each other at a party and they started talking about their children.Acorrding to Tom, his son is tall,strong,outgoing,lively and he looks very sunny.He also has a gift for sport.He can bungee jump and ride a horse, and he can play several ball games such as basketball,tennis,volleyball and baseball.On the contrary,however, Micky's girl is short,slim,shy,sensitive and she looks very quiet.She is nether (neither) outgoing nor lively but she excels in intelligence.She is good at languages and can speak six languages, including Chinese,Russian,Korean,Portuguese,German and Persian.Besides,she has a gift for literature,she can write novels and poem (poems) and (to)tell you the truth, her handwriting is far more charming than herself! As Micky puts it, she is a (an) excellent daughter.
scarlett0306
越来越多的人意识到英语的重要性，想要开始学习英语，但不知道该怎么开始。下面就来说说英语初级入门怎么学，一起来看看吧!第一.单词语法有很多方法记住单词，可以在阅读中记忆单词，这样既不枯燥也能牢牢记住。如语法、翻译、答疑等技巧主要是在课堂上获得的，所以我们要注意课后学会总结、归纳、理解、记忆，做到实际运用。如果你的语法不好，可以买一本语法书学习。第二.英语阅读英语阅读是比较重要的一部分，每天至少练习一次。快速阅读是一种有效的阅读方法，其原理在于激活眼脑的潜能，培养和提高阅读速度、整体感知、归纳理解、集中注意力等能力，对阅读理解有很大帮助。掌握快速阅读后，可以快速提取文章的关键信息，提高做题的效率和准确性，节省大量时间，轻松完成。进行英语阅读理解时，要注意：不要逐字翻译，不要重复你想读的句子。也就是说，当你读不懂一个句子时，往往会陷入反复的思考中。这是不必要的，因为选择正确的答案并不意味着你应该理解原文中的每一个句子，掌握一些重点句子就足够了。正确的方法是集中理解整个段落，并试图找出涵盖主题点的句子。第三.英语写作写作是一件综合性的事情，单词、语法、阅读都是基础，有了前面的积累，平时多练习，写作就不成问题了。如果时间允许的话，每天写一篇作文，或者最坏的情况下，一周也要写一篇。第四.听力要练习好的听力，首先要选择合适的听力材料，所选的听力材料必须真实，尽可能具有包容性，既要涵盖正式语言，也要涵盖日常会话的不同领域和主题。材料要从简单开始，逐步增加难度。利用业余时间，将大量的演讲材料连贯而不重复地听，不需要听懂每一个单词，只听大致的意思。这种听力方法不要求你听太多内容，但一定要听懂每一个句子，把握每一个细节。
