方可可同学
refund可以是动词也可以是名词,因为前面有a修饰,所以这里是名词的意思,也就是,退还(钱款),那么I'd like a refund.翻译过来就是,我想要一笔钱款。
热心网友小王
写作思路:按题目要求,写出手机不满意,要求换货或退款,注意语法不要错。
正文:
Dear Sir
尊敬的先生
I'm writing to tell you about my experience in your store.
我写信是想告诉你我在你们商场的经历。
Three days ago, I just got the mobile phone I ordered from your store.
三天前,我刚从你们店里买了一部手机。
You sent it on time and thanks for that.
你按时寄来的,谢谢。
But I found several problems.
但我发现了几个问题。
First, the color is not what I wanted.
首先,颜色不是我想要的。
I wanted golden, but you gave me silver instead.
我想要金色,但你给了我银色。
I thought that would be OK, if everything else is good enough.
我想如果其他一切都足够好的话,那就没问题了。
The stranger thing happens.
奇怪的事情发生了。
The mobile phone gets five minutes slower every day, so I have to keep correcting it.
手机每天慢了五分钟,所以我得一直修正它。
Because of this, I feel nervous about being late for work.
因此,我总感觉上班迟到感到紧张。
I really cannot stand it any longer.
我真的受不了了。
I would like you to change my mobile phone. Or give me the money back.
我想让你换一下我的手机。或者把钱退给我。
Along with the letter is the copy of the order.
随信附上的是订单副本。
Thank you. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
非常感谢。我期待着您的回音。
Yours sincerely
谨上