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1.The Characteristic(s) of America Education Be sensitive with complimentary and critical remarks.Do not compare one child to another.Do not compare students with each other.◎Think a lot of benefit practice and but make light of reputation (我不是很理解你这句话的内容.)Emphasize more on cooperative learning and make light of elitism.Encourage cooperative learning and discourage elitism.2. My view of American education ,summarizing in three sentences.◎NO CHILD LEFT BEHIND ◎The Wind Of Freedom Blows ◎Made In China Be sensitive with complimentary and critical remarks.◎我不同意你说的关于美国教师不在公开场合表扬学生的观点.相反他们公开大力表扬学生,但是他们表扬时,是表扬什么行为,而不是空洞地说某个学生好,听话. 我可不可以给出我的意见?( Can I say a few words?)American teachers always believe in positive teaching. Whenever they make compliments, they emphase on specific good behaviors. For example, the teachers would say,” I like the way Johnny sits.” Or “ I am so proud of Mary. She cleans up her toys today.” “Compliment on David for using the magic words with his classmates.” Remarks like these are clear and fair so that other children know very well what the teachers expect them to do. When the teachers make critical remarks, again it is the undesirable behaviors that should be addressed. “ I am so disappointed that Johnny didn’t do his homework. “ David, it is very rude to do that. Do you want others treat you the same way you treat them?” Remarks like these are avoided,” Linda is good . David is bad . The teachers don’t purposely set up role models or elites. All students are considered excellent as long as they do what they are told.◎Do not to compare to others student Do not one child to another.The American teachers think that there are many ways to weigh things so they never compare one student to another. Because they think each individual is unique. They respect the differences of each student. They believe everybody can learn, just not on the same day, or the same way. They organize instructions so that all students are given the opportunity to learn what is being taught. Of course, American students would never go through this “nerve breakdown and heartbeats pounding when reading everybody’s grades on a bulletin board.因此,美国学生没有体会过看成绩排名时心中乱跳的感觉(不会翻><)。 ◎Encourage cooperative learning and discourage elitism.In American schools students learn about group cooperation or teamwork. Everybody can make contributions to a group project. When children take part in a contest, they care more about the process rather than the rankings. They are taught to feel good about themselves. Some children are talented in art. Some children are talented in math. So everybody is special in a certain way.

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额,这个这个,中式英语痕迹重了点,就只在语法时态单词上修改了。Hello, everyone! I am very pleased to stand here. I want to talk about the problems of environment. Now, the pollution becomes very serious,such as noise pollution, air pollution and so on. People's life is much better than before, and science and technology are being improved little by little, but the environment is troubled by pollution. Therefore, in order to protect our home ,we need to protect the environment from time to time. When you see a lawn, what will you want to do? TO step on it or to protect it? As Middle School students, we should protect it,shouldn't we ?("is that wrong?"实在太中式了,建议不用;不喜欢我的该法可以自己再想个。) It is also important to protect trees. Living under the same clouds and the sky, people share the same living place. However, the Earth doesn’t belong to them only. Other creatures,for example,trees, can also be masters . Why should we protect trees? Let me tell you.They protect the sky from smoke and dust.They keep air fresh.And they help the world remain green.Imaging this,If we don’t protect them and let them gone, what kind of world is to be left ?Briefly,protection is far from satisfying. One more suggestion, plant some! Believe me , none of you here would like to see the last tree cut dowm.(这里本人发挥的有点多……) There are many ways to protect the environment. We all hope that birds sing every morning and every corner, fish swim in the water freely (不会只有sea吧,淡水鱼哪去了?), and tree branches dance in the wind cheerfully. so let’s protect the environment together, ok? (这句别扭啊,建议修改。)That’s all, thanks for listening to my speech!
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When i was a junior high school student, my English was poor as a consequence of my being addicted to the computer games. Besides, I kind of disliked my English teacher who hurt me when she said that I dragged on the performance of our class in the face of all my classmates. So I lost interest and confidence in learning English. Now I stil puzzle over the question why do we have to learn English just to pass the exam or to be admitted into a key university? At present, my English is stil poor. But I am grateful to my English teacher (这里可以加老师名字) and each of my classmate who have offered me help and encouragement in learning English. I wish I could fall in love with English and make it part of my life one day. At that time, I wil find how beautiful English is.你的有几处语法错误,我给你改了,并且给了一些更高级的词汇短语,加了一些从句,所以句子有些长,如果不好背的话,你还可以自己删减一下。
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