独孤道兵
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史瑞克0111
Every body wants to succeed. But when it comes to the question that which factor leads to success, opportunity or hard-work, different people will offer different answers.
Some people think that opportunity is the first factor leading to success. They hold the idea, as a proverb saying, “Man proposes, god disposes”. Because almost all successful people have good luck and have caught their valuable opportunities, they believe that opportunity is a leading condition of the success. If seizes and makes the best use of opportunity available, one can succeed surely. In summary, to them, chances and lucks play the most important role on the road to success.
However, others maintain that “no pains, no gains” .Without exerting oneself, one could never expect to achieve success in no matter what one is doing. As is known to all, there is no royal road to the summit of success. One is likely to succeed only when one has worked with whole-hearted devotion and perseverance. Those who are lazy, sloppy and indifferent to their work, those who never concentrate on work will definitely end in failure. On the whole, as far as they are concerned, hard-working is the decisive factor to success.
In my view, both hard work and opportunity eventually matters. They are inseparable from each other, and put together, they make a great success. Hard work is to luck what fish is to water, and can be seen as an interior precondition of success. It lays the corner-stone for building a house while luck serves to cement it, to make the building bricks adherent to one another. They are the twins that contribute to success together. They are the factors from within and without respectively. We must work hard, make efforts and get prepared. When opportunities come, meet and make full use of them. Only in this way can we succeed one day.
译文:
每个人都想成功。但当涉及到哪些因素导致成功,机会和辛勤工作,不同的人会给出不同的答案。
有些人认为机会是第一个成功的主要因素。他们认为,作为一个谚语说,“谋事在人,成事在天”。因为几乎所有成功的人都有好运气,抓住宝贵的机会,他们认为机会是成功的主要条件。如果抓住和充分利用机会,一定可以成功。总之,对他们来说,机会和运气在成功的道路上扮演最重要的角色。
然而,另一些人则认为“没有痛苦,就没有收获”。没有发挥自己,没有人能指望取得成功,无论你在干什么。众所周知,没有捷径成功的首脑会议。一个成功的可能只有一个曾与全心的奉献精神和毅力。那些懒惰的,草率的和对他们的工作,那些不专心的工作一定会失败。总体上,就他们而言,勤奋是成功的决定性因素。
在我看来,都努力工作,最终事情的机会。他们互相离不开,放在一起,他们让一个巨大的成功。勤奋是好运什么鱼是水,可以视为一个内部成功的前提。它奠定了基础,为建设一个房子虽然运气用于水泥,使建筑砖块附着到另一个。他们是双胞胎,一起有助于成功。他们是从内部和外部因素分别。我们必须努力工作,努力做好准备。每当机遇降临,达到充分利用他们。只有这样我们才能有成功的一天。
曰月無塵
一.开头用语: 良好的开端等于成功的一半.在写作文时,通常以最简单也最常用的方式---开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求,点出文章的中心思想。 1.议论论文: A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages. B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient. C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,... D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside. E. As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life. F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view. 2. 书信: A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar. B. I read an advertisement in today’s China Daily and I apply for the job... C. Thank you for your letter of May 5. D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9. E. How nice to hear from you again. 3. 口头通知或介绍情况: A. Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please. I have an announcement to make. B. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you. C. Mr. Green, Welcome to our school. To begin with, let me introduce Mr. Wang to you. 4. 演讲稿: A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject -- A Balance Diet and Health. B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest. 二.并列用语: as well as, not only…but (also), including, A. Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life. B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture. C. He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and French as well.=He speaks not only English but also French. D. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication. 三.对比用语: on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to ..., though, for
xiaoyoubaobei
Every body wants to succeed. But when it comes to the question that which factor leads to success, opportunity or hard-work, different people will offer different answers. Some people think that opportunity is the first factor leading to success. They hold the idea, as a proverb saying, “Man proposes, god disposes”. Because almost all successful people have good luck and have caught their valuable opportunities, they believe that opportunity is a leading condition of the success. If seizes and makes the best use of opportunity available, one can succeed surely. In summary, to them, chances and lucks play the most important role on the road to success. However, others maintain that “no pains, no gains” .Without exerting oneself, one could never expect to achieve success in no matter what one is doing. As is known to all, there is no royal road to the summit of success. One is likely to succeed only when one has worked with whole-hearted devotion and perseverance. Those who are lazy, sloppy and indifferent to their work, those who never concentrate on work will definitely end in failure. On the whole, as far as they are concerned, hard-working is the decisive factor to success. In my view, both hard work and opportunity eventually matters. They are inseparable from each other, and put together, they make a great success. Hard work is to luck what fish is to water, and can be seen as an interior precondition of success. It lays the corner-stone for building a house while luck serves to cement it, to make the building bricks adherent to one another. They are the twins that contribute to success together. They are the factors from within and without respectively. We must work hard, make efforts and get prepared. When opportunities come, meet and make full use of them. Only in this way can we succeed one day.成功:机遇还是努力工作?每个人都想成功。但当涉及到哪些因素导致成功,机会和辛勤工作,不同的人会给出不同的答案。有些人认为机会是第一个成功的主要因素。他们认为,作为一个谚语说,“谋事在人,成事在天”。因为几乎所有成功的人都有好运气,抓住宝贵的机会,他们认为机会是成功的主要条件。如果抓住和充分利用机会,一定可以成功。总之,对他们来说,机会和运气在成功的道路上扮演最重要的角色。然而,另一些人则认为“没有痛苦,就没有收获”。没有发挥自己,没有人能指望取得成功,无论你在干什么。众所周知,没有捷径成功的首脑会议。一个成功的可能只有一个曾与全心的奉献精神和毅力。那些懒惰的,草率的和对他们的工作,那些不专心的工作一定会失败。总体上,就他们而言,勤奋是成功的决定性因素。在我看来,都努力工作,最终事情的机会。他们互相离不开,放在一起,他们让一个巨大的成功。勤奋是好运什么鱼是水,可以视为一个内部成功的前提。它奠定了基础,为建设一个房子虽然运气用于水泥,使建筑砖块附着到另一个。他们是双胞胎,一起有助于成功。他们是从内部和外部因素分别。我们必须努力工作,努力做好准备。每当机遇降临,达到充分利用他们。只有这样我们才能有成功的一天。