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第一段的less and less好像怪怪的，应该改成there are very seldom people.....第二段的As weall know是As well know第三段的excellent books好像用得不对，应该是用good来代替excellent就好了(good books)So we have time and necessary to focus on excellent books.应该是...So, we should take the time out to read those good books.很多字应该要分开写，是忘记了吗？比如说the response，greatest contribution，people in，my perspective，reading classics，undergraduates have.纯属意见.
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英语六级翻译跟作文不是同一个人批阅的，每个阅卷老师只负责一部分的批阅。在考试结束后大学英语六级考试试卷要经过以下流程才会公布成绩。1、监考人查阅人数2、督导员查阅试卷封装3、机要邮寄4、鉴定中心收取试卷5、考生隐私处理6、分发阅题专家7、取分等差8、上报审核机关9、分数审核分数10、解封考生隐私11、发文程序12、公示平台维护13、正式公布英语六级考试成绩公布从这项算作结束，不过这也是英语六级考试成绩单制作流程的开始。参考2015年6月英语六级成绩于8月分公布，预计2015年12月份英语六级成绩于2016年2月分公布。
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The way to success There is a famous remark said by Abraham Lincoln,"Give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the the first four sharpeing the axe."Simple it is,what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.All of us want to acheive success,but here comes a question, how to do it? The answer is different,Lincoln'words is helpful for us to have a deep thingking.In china,the students must be studing ten years and we can take part in the final exam in this ten years we can have a good fundation,only in this way can we pass the eaxm.It's impossible for everybody to achieve success in an easier way,we must work harder and harder,improve our ability and skills,then we can beat others in competiton.Why Lincoln spend so many time to sharpeing the axe? Because the clearly dumd know the former preperation is the mostly important.已经帮你修改了语法上的错误咯~望采纳
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The way to success There is a famous remark said by Abraham Lincoln,"Give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the the first four hours sharpeing the axe." Simple it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. All of us want to acheive success,but how to do? The answer is different,Lincoln'words is helpful for us to have a in-depth thinking. In china,our students must be studied for ten years before they can take part in the final examination. In this ten years, the student can have a good fundation. Only in this way can we pass the eaxm. It's impossible for everybody to achieve success in a easier way. We must work hard to improve our skills and broaden our knowledge, We can then beat others in competiton. Why Lincoln spend so much time to sharpen the axe? This is because it is clear that ther preperation is more important then execution.
