Moser～子涵
1. Positive willpower helps us overcome inertia and focus on the future. When the going gets tough, visualize you happily and busily engaged in your goal, and you'll keep working toward it.很漂亮的英文。只用改一个字：visualize you happily and......中的 you 改成 yourself，然后在 your goal 中间加一个 own。2. willpower 可以这么写，也可以分开写。3. 看不出有什么错。非得找个错出来的话，建议把 contemplation 换成 consideration about it。4. but 后面的部分虽然离主语很远，但与前面的部分共享一个主语：good teachers：...... good teachers differ with respect to how well aware each is of what is happening with their students and in their classes from moment to moment.
雨霖霖i
1）Problems with the new data management software showed up soon after it was launched. （用词错误）2）In other words, grammatical metaphor examined in the semantic model can't be viewed as the result of transference. （用词错误）3）Before spelling out exactly what this means, it is worth first asking whether translating machinery is necessarily irreversible. （用词重复）4）Being in charge, the accusation was particularly annoying to me. （垂悬分词）5）However, there were other patients whose lives had ended by (in) suicide. （介词使用错误）
疯疯丫头315
1.knows 2. 加"last" before evening; 3, why was she angry4.does 改 do 5. has graduated; 6/ 7. for ten minutes; 8. 去掉 have 9. / 10. were
玖兰卅麻
1.What->How2.skills->skill3.√4.Actuaily->Actually to^+do5.most->mostly6.here->there7.去掉been8.asked->told9.去掉the10.live->alive11.去掉to12.in->in the13.√14.difference->different15.occasionally->occasional16.join->joined17.out->out what18.many->best19.examples->example20.peoples->people21.lot->lots22.去掉第一个to23.though->but24.works->work25.few->a few26.staying->stay27.proper->properly28.or->and29.course->courses30.It's->They're31.去掉in
