高级英语文章改写

In fact, when I saw this title, I thought I'd rather live in the countryside. Not only because of the blue sky, white clouds and fresh air, but also I can live a relaxed, lazy rural life. However, this way of life may be only in my imagination. So, after further reflection, I think I like living in the city when I was young.Initially, the traffic is more convenient. For those who live in remote rural areas, traffic is very troublesome. I don't live in the country right now, I just live in a relatively remote area away from the city, but I already feel the traffic is uncomfortable. If I want to go to the mall, I have to spend at least two hours on the road. Not to mention the inconvenience of traffic when I want to go on a trip.In addition, health care is safer. The city's medical standards and resources far more than the countryside, no one can refuse to live in a place where they can get better health care.What's more, the education level is higher. The educational platform and educational resources are much higher than those in rural areas. These examples show that it is common for parents to move to a better place for their children to receive education.For these reasons, I like living in the city. The idle, lazy country life like a parasite, I will enjoy it when I am old and rich.求采纳

您好！您这一篇文章语句通顺，少有语法错误，而且内容很实在，用词到位。本人认为并不需要做过多修改，您完全可以对您自己有信心。您并不需要苛求高级句式，有时候高级句式反而会让人混淆，您这篇文章的文风已经很好了，力求简单简洁，清楚明了，这样的文章是非常有效，令人印象深刻的。我建议您在开头或者是结尾的时候，引用名人名言，然后用一两局比较高级的句型就足够了。有一句要指出：If it is forgivable, I WILL choose to accept and give him another chance. 这里主句要用将来时还不是过去时。

这就是修改过后的作文了，自己对照原来的看吧，改了不少小东西，分段没来得及整理，自己看吧！一定要采纳我哦！Telling lies are used to have bad reputation. However, it is true that we live in a world whelies are given every dayTeachers beautify the performance of their studentsto encourage confidence.Doctors hide the truth of the illness to keep theirpatients optimistic.Lovers tell sweet words to keep intimate relationship.of the beautiful lies, I am deeply touched by the story in which apainter drew a leaf everyday outside his window to raise hope of a terminallyill patient. Sometimestelling lies help us to deal with tough things and get another opportunity tomake it better. Therefore, whether it is good to tell lies cannot be easilyconcluded by a definite answer. Instead, it should be judged by its motivation. As a highschool student, the instruction of our teacher and the anticipation of ourparents give me great pressure. When I did not perform quite well in the test, sometimes I told a lie to avoid letting them down. However, as I felt ashamedand uneasy about it, I would be stimulated to study harder, waiting for thenext opportunity to prove my ability. Followed bythe same standard, when I am cheated, I persuade myself to calm down and thinkabout the motivation of his lies. If it is forgivable, I chose to accept andgive him another chance. A well-knownstudy shows that an ordinary person tells three lies one day. So, I would rather enjoy itthan live as a hypocrite. Telling white lies in a necessary time and a well-meaningway, our living world is more diverse; our lives are more interesting, full of surpriseand possibilities.