MichaelShaoer
Tom's last FridayLast Friday,Tom got up at six in the morning.Then he washed his face and brushed his teeth.After a quick breakfast,he went to school in his mother's car.It took them more than half an hour to get there.They had four hour classes in the morning.He had lunch at his grandparents',because their home is nearer to his school.(这是现在也存在的事实状态，故不用一般过去式）After two classes in the afternoon,school was over.Then they cleaned their classroom.He got home at about half past five.They had dinner at seven.After dinner he did his homework.If he had finished his homework early,he could watch TV for half an hour.He went to bed at half past nine or ten. That wasTom's Friday.
贵州米粉
作文的改写其实就是句子的改写，意思不变，那么改的肯定是他的表达，一般从词语的替换入手，尤其是一些关联词，同意词组，例如文章中如果有leadto那么我们就可以改成giveriseto,resultin等等表示导致意思的词语。有些我们就要改写句子的结构。例如有些时候我们可以改成形式宾语的形式，例如文章中有这么一句话Englishissohardforme.我们就可以改成IfindithardtolearnEnglish.当然我们不能为了改写而改写，改的时候要保证句子正确与漂亮，尽量避免相同的句式，也不要出现很多I,I,I什么的。你可以先从改写句子着手。希望对你有所帮助
方孔金钱
One summer night ,Henry was sleeping in his room，suddenly he woke up and sensed that something unusual happened. He looked out of the window and found that a store nearby on the street was on fire . He immediately shouted as loud as possible. "Fire!Fire!Help!" He called 119 at once and then went out to fight the fire. But the fire was so great that he couldn't put it out by himself .Luckily enough,a lot of neighbors came out and soon firefighters arrived,too.The fire was finally put out, when the firefighters praised Henry for his quick action,he smiled and felt very pleased.
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