夏小麦521
if the personality of yourself in daily life is the same as these screen images自己看看吧，你一定能看出来。灵儿 is such kind of girl who is very pity and lovely2个错误。I have to agree that she is the most sophisticated characters i've ever met. 这个很明显吧。and found that herself was also a woman who perfer love to life. 这句错儿很多。反身代词能作主语么？最后一句又错了2处。以上仅仅是语法上的（而且是比较严重和显而易见的），至于用词，就不说了。否则很抱歉，真是体无完肤了。
