介绍笔友英语

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Dear Dick, I am glad to hear from you. I will tell you something about my study and daily life.Because we have many things to study, our lessons are very hard. I want to do well by myself.We have lessons from Monday to Friday,and study many different things.I'm very interested in English and foreign culture. Of course,I play basketball and football after class.Sometimes I listen to music. I like popular music.I like reading ,too.It is a good way to relax.That's all. I will alawys wait for your letter . Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 1.Because和So不能在一起使用 2.knowledge是知识的意思, 不能用来形容去学习 学习的只是书本上的东西 3.done多余 4.play the basketball and football是一种习惯,不能用将来时,还有此处的the 多余, 5.有时听音乐,前面不用将来时,此处保持一致 6.It is a good way to relax介词要用 to 7.等待对方的来信是将来时,不能用现在进行时

以下两篇，参考一下 1. My pen pal is an outstanding person.我的笔友是一个出色的人。 She's from China Shanghai. 她来自上海。 She is 14 years old.她今年14岁。 She speak English very well. 她英语说的很好。 She can play the Guzheng. 她会弹古筝。 She has many hobbies: watching TV, reading books, playing computer games and singing. 她有很多爱好：看电视、看书、玩电脑和唱歌。 I very like she. 我非常喜欢她。 2.My pen pal I have a pen pal.Her name is Nancy.She comes from England.She is 13 years old.She can speak English and a little French.She is a good student.Her favorite subjects are math,history.She thinks China is a beautiful country with a long history.She can play the piano and the guitar.I think she is nice.希望有帮助，谢谢采纳