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一篇结构完整的英语作文一般分三部分:开篇(beginning); 主体 (body); 结尾(ending )。“英语写作五字诀!”:审、列、写、查、评。就是一个完整的英语写作闭环。1. 审拿到作文,一定不要急于下笔,先做准备,也就是要认真审题。审什么?主题根据题目要求和提供的信息,先搞清楚让我们写什么,要分几段,每段的主题是什么?确定人称和时态。这个过程其实就是学生在头脑中建构信息的过程。2. 列审题之后可以写了吧?还要再等一下,等完成列的过程。列什么?列词汇、句型、连接词。考试的时候,常常没有时间打草稿。直接在试卷上“一次成文”,又常常内容混乱,结构颠倒。列就成了必要。先简单列出段落以及每段中的重点词汇、句型和连接词。既是从总体上对结构的布局和审视,还可以避免天马行空,写偏了的尴尬。3. 写有了前面的充分准备,就可以下笔成文了。要注意书写呦,你的笔迹就是你的脸面。好看的“脸”,能够让阅卷老师瞬间对你产生好感。4. 查写文之后,可不要轻敌,一定要认真检查,不要等走下考场,拍着大腿喊:“呀,我太马虎了!”查什么呢?查结构,查语法。5. 评如果在课堂上,老师指导,学生可以互评。在考场上,自己给自己一个评价,大概估计自己的分数。任何一篇优秀的作文,都是不断练习方法,不断积累的结果。
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英语写作基本表达及结构
基本表达
人们认为:it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that
越来越:be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of
万能理由(Omnipotence)
1. 方便:convenient/ convenience
2. 效率:efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency
3. 节省和浪费:save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish
4. 人的心理健康:independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative
5. 人的身体健康:health, disease, strong, strength, energetic
6. 娱乐:colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax tired, boring, lonely
7. 环境:environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty
8. 安全和危险:safe, danger, risk
9. 经验:experience, social experience, enter the society
10. 人际:humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely
结构
(启)Paragraph I:(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点; (2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启) 注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的.文章逻辑结构:
(承)Paragraph II:(1)提出一种观点或优点;(2)本段的支持性分论点;(3)本段总结(可以省略)。 Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.(承) 注:1. 本段总分总结构 2. they argue that = they think that 3. with the development of... 随着的发展 4. whats more 递进关系,moreover 5. bad = pornographic 色情的 violent 暴力的 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(转)Paragraph III:(1)承上启下的过渡句; (2)提出另一种观点或缺点;(3)本段的支持性分论点(4)本段总(可以省略)。 But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.(转) 注:1. But 转折词(信号词) 2. they emphasize that = they think that 3. todays society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比 4. 许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge; 获取知识 acquire/ get knowledge 5. knows nothinglittle;he may be uselesshe may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(合)Paragraph IV:(1)平衡两种看法;(2)给出自己的观点。 Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.(合) Score: 11分 When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better. 注:结构非常好,可以套用。
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