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这就是修改过后的作文了，自己对照原来的看吧，改了不少小东西，分段没来得及整理，自己看吧！一定要采纳我哦！Telling lies are used to have bad reputation. However, it is true that we live in a world whelies are given every dayTeachers beautify the performance of their studentsto encourage confidence.Doctors hide the truth of the illness to keep theirpatients optimistic.Lovers tell sweet words to keep intimate relationship.of the beautiful lies, I am deeply touched by the story in which apainter drew a leaf everyday outside his window to raise hope of a terminallyill patient. Sometimestelling lies help us to deal with tough things and get another opportunity tomake it better. Therefore, whether it is good to tell lies cannot be easilyconcluded by a definite answer. Instead, it should be judged by its motivation. As a highschool student, the instruction of our teacher and the anticipation of ourparents give me great pressure. When I did not perform quite well in the test, sometimes I told a lie to avoid letting them down. However, as I felt ashamedand uneasy about it, I would be stimulated to study harder, waiting for thenext opportunity to prove my ability. Followed bythe same standard, when I am cheated, I persuade myself to calm down and thinkabout the motivation of his lies. If it is forgivable, I chose to accept andgive him another chance. A well-knownstudy shows that an ordinary person tells three lies one day. So, I would rather enjoy itthan live as a hypocrite. Telling white lies in a necessary time and a well-meaningway, our living world is more diverse; our lives are more interesting, full of surpriseand possibilities.
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想要体高英语作文写作水平在原有的基础上进行修改提升是非常有效的办法，下面我就跟你们分享下怎么修改英语作文 一、英语作文的等级 四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分 三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6 处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分 二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分 一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分 二、英语作文修改案例 案例一： A Trip to the Zoo 原稿： Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo. I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos. That’s a interesting trip. I’ll never forget it. That’s my trip. 修改后： It was a sunny Sunday After a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus. This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo! As soon as I got there, I was attracted at once. Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. How naughty they were! What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers. They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . I t came to my mind immiediatly. Anyway, I had an interesting trip today . It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it. 案例二： My favourite season 原稿： There are four seasons in a year. And my favourite season is summer. Although it’s very hot. I still love it .Because I can swim in the sea .And lie in sun . That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. That’s very intersting. So I love summer. That’s my favourite season. 修改后 My favourite season As is all know , there are four seasons. Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot. Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach … How comfortable ! More importantly I can eat delicious Icecream . Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father . In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness . 三、英语作文修改的注意事项 1、整篇文章逻辑的修改.作文的目的是为了表达东西,所以首先要确保作文表达的内容是清楚并且符合逻辑的,如果段落之间都是矛盾的就说不过去了. 2、语法的修改篇章与段落的修改过后看句子的结构,说仔细了就是语法的修改. 3、还有就是单词拼写等小细节的修改了.
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你知道如何自己批改英语作文吗？一起来看看吧。 我们给自己批改英语作文的时候，首先应该选择一只不同颜色的笔，这样改起来就会更加的醒目，而且我们在纠错改错的时候也就会更容易更方便，更直观的看见我们的错误。 我们在修改英语作文的时候，首先要注重的就是我们的英语时态问题，这是大家最常见的错误，也是一个最致命的错误。一般来说，如果是用I的话，应该后面带的是have而不是has。 我们在批改英语作文的时候，还应该注意我们英语作文的逻辑性，比如说我们在写一件事的时候，应该加上一些关联词，例如，first at all，finally等等。 给自己批改英语作文的时候，还可以选择一些比较简单的句式，想办法把这些词汇变成更高级的用语，这样子我们在阅卷老师看起来，我们的英文水平和词汇用语的难度就会更深一级，而我们的得分相对来说也会就高一些。
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