你需要改变英文

do you need to correct it?

Do you need any revise?

Do you need to make any changes?或者，Do you need to update anything/ any information?英文中更改更多的用的是update而不是change，update比change地道的多。

Your health condition is not very good, so you need to adjust your eating habit and life style.

你需要的只是一些改变You just need some change.你需要的只是一些改变You just need some change.