小羊囡囡
作文的改写其实就是句子的改写，意思不变，那么改的肯定是他的表达，一般从词语的替换入手，尤其是一些关联词，同意词组，例如文章中如果有leadto那么我们就可以改成giveriseto,resultin等等表示导致意思的词语。有些我们就要改写句子的结构。例如有些时候我们可以改成形式宾语的形式，例如文章中有这么一句话Englishissohardforme.我们就可以改成IfindithardtolearnEnglish.当然我们不能为了改写而改写，改的时候要保证句子正确与漂亮，尽量避免相同的句式，也不要出现很多I,I,I什么的。你可以先从改写句子着手。希望对你有所帮助
三鲜豆皮皮
有问题。
原句：Faye Wong is my favorite singer.I like Faye Wong because of her voice is as Clean as an angel and ethereal crooning as a valley bird.
王菲是我最喜爱的歌手，我喜欢王菲是因为她的嗓音如天使般纯洁，轻灵的嗓音如同布谷鸟一样。
Faye Wong is my favorite singer.I love Faye Wong because her voice is as clean as an angel and ethereal crooning as a valley bird.
解释：1.because of 换成because。
because是连词，引导从句，because of是复合介词，后面加名词或相当于名词的词、代词、动名词、what 从句等。
例如；
I didn't buy it because it was too expensive. 我没有买是因为它太贵了。
He lost his job because of his age. 由于年龄关系他失去了工作。
2.like换成love
搜的个人喜好而已。喜爱的话，love表达感觉更合适。like就没有那么强烈的感觉了。
以上个人建议，请按实际情况修改。
陈家小鱼儿
改写英语作文 jenny's family以第三人称 There are four people in my family,my parents,my bother and I.My family is pretty good.I’m really happy.My brother is shy and funny.He is good at sports and does well in football.My father is a doctor.He works in a hospital .He doesn’t like watching TV,.My mother is a waitress.She works in a restaurant..She likes eating vegetables every day.I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
福气娃娃TT
好像以前背过嘢~ I get up at 6 o'clock.I take a shower and brush my teeth at forty past to six,than I get dressed and comb my hair.At seven o'clock my mom makes breakkfast for me,and I always help her ,and then I eat my breakfast.My breakfast usually have bread,milk,and an egg.Some times,I have juice.At twenty past seven I get ready for school,ten minutes later hurry to school.When class begain at 8 o'clock,I study hard.I often have lunch with noodles at 12 o'clock.At 3 o'clock,the class is over,so I usually play soccer,but sometimes I go to my dance lesson.
