命丧与她丶
1.as-while while连接两个同时发生的动作.as没有这个功能.2.rings-变过去时. 整篇都是过去时.3.me-my 这里是"我的",不能用宾格.4.a-the phone是特指,就是自己用这个,a表示泛指,不知道具体哪部电话.5.room和full中间加 was be full of 固定句型.6.opening-opened 没啥好解释的啊,过去式,跟前面的turned照应.7.in-to to one's surprise出乎某人的意料之外,固定句型.8.没看出有错.9.about去掉 tell sb...告诉某人.. 中间没有介词.10.which去掉
芒果布丁sweet
第二行：make 改为 makes 第五行：删除been 第六行：not 后的the 改为 a 第八行：subject 改为 subjects ; something 改为nothing 第十行： us 改为 me ； me 后面加 to 第十一行：helps 改为 helped 第十二行：in 改为 on 第十五行： which 改为 where
氷之世界
这都是定语从句的错误啊1：第二个there改成where2：in other places where 改成which3： when 改成that 或which4 wher改成which5 which 改成where6 where 改成which7 ,this 改成which8 there 改成where9 where改成which或that
张小繁繁繁
1，shorter→short 2，to后面加borrow 3，when改为that，或者去掉 4，where改为which 5，which改为where 6，同4 7，was改为is 8，there改为where 11，where改为that 1. there→where 2. that→which 3.when→that 4.where→which 5which→where 6.where→that 7.this前面加and或者this→which 8.there→where 9where→that 或which
bibilove726726
第三句，THE 改为A;第六句ARE 改为IS；第十句.Myself 改为I；第十二句，home前加AT；14.The danger has gone,so the worst IS over；15.It is the GOIDEN age of the young.16.She is a WARM-HEARTED woman.17.I'll be free next Sunday19.He worked with MY friends
街头流浪泡泡
改正下列句中错误1.Please give me two pieces of letter paper.paper 是不可数名词，不能用复数2.Can you give me today's newspaper? today是时间名词，有所有格形式3.I want to leanr the second language this term. leanr 改为learn4.Mississippi is one of the longest rivers in the world. 没有错5.Times is one of the oldest newspapers in the world.6.Rich are not always happy. the rich is not alweays happy. the rich是有钱人7.Sometimes my parents come to school to see me.come to my school（来我学校）. come to school （上学）8.He and you should go to the library to return the books. you and he9.His brother is taller than him. him 改为he10.Myself did it yesterday.myself改为i11.Take care of ourselves.ourselves 改为yourselves12.Make yourself home.13.-I hope she might pass the exam.mightg 改为could-I don't hope so.14.The danger has gone,so the worst are over. are改为is15.It is the gold age of the young. gold 改为golden16.She is a warm heart woman.warm heart 改为warm-hearted17.I'll be free on next Sunday. 去掉on19.He worked with me friends.me改为my20.Someone called you right now. right 改为just21.My father will be back from America at present.at present改为soon
