英语高中作文14分

买本作文书，实在！

首先问你一个问题，你的阅读成绩好吗？如果有一定的基础，写作能力很快就可以提高的。 还有你的词汇量，这也是重点， 其实写作要注意很多小问题的，很难说的清楚拉，老师讲解作文时注意听，尽可能不要写太多的简单句。总之平时多练习就肯定没有错。

中考作文其实要求并不是很高。主要是按照题目所给的要点来写不要漏写他们老师改的时候有个基础分是按你写的要点来给的，然后尽量避免错误就可以了。还有就是整体感觉。要有逻辑性，语句通顺，不要写着写着突然冒出一句。达到字数就OK。至于那些很复杂的句子，初中应该没什么要求，到高中作文才会用的比较多。

From immaturity to maturity,from adversity to success, everyone’s growing progress is a kind of changing one. So  is mine .At first,I was shy and I used to stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class. I only like playing computer games at home. Because I hated English ,my English mark is very low in the exam.Later ,a girl came to my class,and she changed my life.She became my best friend. She asked me to play outside with others .She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud ,to talk to her in English. I also practice English after school. Gradually, My English score was higher and higher. Now,I am a confident and outgoing girl .I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me . 试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写其变化前后的样子、促成其转变的主要原因和其为此变化付出的努力。写过去用一般过去时，转变后的现在用一般现在时。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短词为文章增色不少，首先是from ...to..., a kind of,used to,instead of,help with.等固定词组，其次还运用了at first，later,gradually, now等使层次更清晰。文章整体内容饱满，条理清晰，表达流畅。

嗯。首先要关心时事。比如 最近的哥本哈根气候大会甲流流感啦。上海世博会啦。这种阅读、听力、作文、都很容易考到。还有要多看看书上的内容。看每个单元教的是什么。课本上的 作文也有可能会考到。透露一下老师们是批中考英语作文的。只要有单词一个小错误（包括错两个标点符号）就0.5分语法错误是1分记住最好别有语法错误哦!!否则写的再流利也最多拿到14.5分复合句 插入语 漂亮的句子多用写就可以啦。实在不行就考试前多写几篇。看有没有运气考试的时候可以套上去。。以上全是个人的经验。没有丝毫网上的成分哦。~祝你中考考个好成绩！~