rememeber24
I am a native speaker from America. Hope this helps!I am young and I am proud. The ebullience of youth shines through me. My eyes are sparkling with happiness, my cheeks pink with excitement, and my smiles full of satisfaction. With youth, I can run around wildly; with youth, I can explore and experiment freely; with youth, I can be myself.Time is the most precious of all things. And I happen to own a lot of time.As a novice, I make mistakes. I correct them. And I learn to never to do that again. Youth gives me chances, youth grants me forgiveness.I am young.Every morning I look into the mirror and I think to myself, if today is the last day of my life, how would I live it?I would use all my mind and heart to absorb new knowledge. I would treat teachers with respect, parents with love, friends with care, and the needy with sympathy. I would live above and beyond myself.Yet I have many of these "last days". I have over 20,000 days ahead of me. I can be as successful as I want to be, as long as I follow my heart.I am young and I am proud.This is a big world. Being a person in the world is my glorious. We have to meet lots of options in the world, so we may lost ourselves.Sometimes we need some distructons release the bad mood.No matter how,by myself is a very important thing. Our mind is made of two parts,one is the right decision and the other is the error decision. We own the ability to make a right decision.We must believe it,so by myself is very important. Everyone dreams of successful, but if the hero never comes to you, if you need someone you're feeling blue, if you're away from love and you are alone, if you call friends and nobody you can find. You can run away but you can't hide.If you through the strom you can find be yourself is such easy. Finally, When the night are getting cold and blue, When the days are getting hard for you, as far as you be yourself and confident in yourself you can find everything will become more and more beautiful!
天晟哥哥
高考英语作文一般最多就150字左右，因为高考英语作文字数要求是120字左右。
高考卷子数量何其多，作文写太多的话阅卷老师是没有很多时间看的，所以要学会精简，像那些意思差不多的句子就写一句能直达主题的就行。
一般一篇25分，字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下：
1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2、评分时，可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、概要部分少于20词或多于40词；全文少于130词或多于180词的，从总分中酌情减去1-2分。
4、评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5、拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6、如字迹难以辨认，以致影响表达，将分数降低一个档次。
实言舌实言兑
One possible version:pride goes before failurethe folktale mainly tells us that in a race Mr. Hare proudly thought he would be sure the beat Mr. Tortoise and so he lay down to have a nap. As a result, he lost the race.From the story, we learn that we must take everything seriously and keep a modest attitude towards our studies or work. Besides, we shouldn’t be proud at any time.The day 1 came first in the English exam was the happiest day of my life. I had studied very diligently for many weeks and was well prepared for the exam. When the teacher announced that I was the first, I felt so proud that I thought my English was already excellent enough and I didn’t need to study English hard any longer. During the following few months, I didn’t listen to the teacher attentively in class and never did I do my homework after class. In the next exam, the result was quite different. I fell far behind.From then on, I became modest and never proud again. 略
银眼的狮子王
字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下：
本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。评分时，可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。概要部分少于20词或多于40词；全文少于130词或多于180词的，从总分中酌情减去1-2分。
评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
举例说明：
We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky, and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.
我们去了海边，海水和天空一样的蓝，在沙滩上沐浴着阳光，是件很享受的事儿。
I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.
我和妹妹还捡了好多五颜六色的贝壳。
There we bought many interesting souvenirs, I was planing to send them to my friends.
我们在这里买了好多有趣的纪念品，我打算送给我的朋友们。
金德易BOSS
Love and attraction are two different things.I do believe in attraction at first sight.You can definitely see someone from across the room,like the way they look and want to meet them.After you meet,you could start dating which could eventually lead to falling in love,but I feel as if you can't truly love someone unless you know him or her Do You Believe in Love at First Sight?
