奇异果香
my favourite place My favourite place is Shenzhen.Shenzhe is a modern city.It is one of China's top tourist destinations. IThe sea in Shenzhen attracted me very much.Its culture is different from the traditional culture of other cities. It is the transformation and activation of inland culture and the absorption and fusion of foreign culture oriented toward Hong Kong. People in Shenzhen are very fridenly and polite.I hope I can visit Shenzhen again.
nana鬼鬼
写作思路及要点：以My favourite place为题，围绕这一主题展开详细描写，接着表达自己的想法以及观点。
正文：
My Favourite Place at School My favourite place at school is the reading-room.It's very big and bright.There are many kinds of books，newspapers and magazines.
我在学校最喜欢的地方是读书室，它非常大，也很聪明，有很多种类的书籍，报纸和杂志。
I like reading newspapers and books there because they not only provide me with much knowledge，but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world.Sometimes，I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.
我喜欢阅读报纸和书籍，因为他们不仅为我提供了许多知识，也帮助我学到了很多关于世界上正在发生的事情，有时，我甚至觉得我可以与人交谈的书籍。
I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there.When I feel tired or unhappy，the reading-room is the best place to go to.Reading helps me forget all my troubles. For me，the reading-room is the place I like best.
我还可以在宁静的环境中放松自己，当我感到疲惫或不开心时，阅览室是的地方。读书可以帮我忘记烦恼。对于我来说，阅览室是我最喜欢的地方。
lalack1987
My Home TownMy home town is a beautiful place.It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town.Many people had no work.They lived a hard life.In 1949 my hometown was liberated.Since then great changes have taken place there.The streets have been widened.Factories,schools,hospitals,cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another.The life of the people is greatly improved.I love my hometown.All the more I love its people.They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
馋猫也优雅
my favourite place My favourite place is Shenzhen.Shenzhe is a modern city.It is one of China's top tourist destinations. IThe sea in Shenzhen attracted me very much.Its culture is different from the traditional culture of other cities. It is the transformation and activation of inland culture and the absorption and fusion of foreign culture oriented toward Hong Kong. People in Shenzhen are very fridenly and polite.I hope I can visit Shenzhen again.我喜欢的地方是深圳。深圳是一个现代化的城市，它是中国最多人去旅游的城市之一。它的海滨深深地吸引了我。它的文化和其他城市的传统文化不同。它结合了国外文化和内地文化。 在深圳的人们都非常友善和有礼貌，我希望我能够有机会再去深圳。
Blackstar01234
my favorite place in school》In library, people know how to restrict themselves, behaved more politely, and it is a good place for you to read plenty of novels and study your own subjests, i used to hanging out in library after school, because even i go home, i may not have the moon or conditions to finish my homework, and it is a good place for you to meet some friends who have something in common and we can share experience on study or other subjects.it's really good to have such a quiet place!
