Tom, How are you?It had been a long time since we wrote. I have just received your email that you asked me about how I would spend my coming holidays. First and foremost, I would have a good rest after a hectic school term. Next, I plan to drive around my house as I have just received my driving licence.As the saying goes,practice makes perfect. Besides, I would attend an English oral course to improve my language. This could help me to obtain a better job when I start working after I had grown up. Furthermore, I would visit Beijing's famous tourist destinations. Beijing is a very developed city in China but had retained its beauty over the years. I hope you could come and visit Beijing. I would welcome you with open hands if you do so. Hope to hear from you soon. Bye. Li Hua
正式的邮件中不要用缩略词 don't要写成 do not.如果是免费午餐,建议说明。如：There will be a free lunch for you tomorrow.If you do not need lunch ,please contact me with e-mial before 9:30a.m. 5th June.2017.Look forward to your arrival。整体语法还行，就是有点Chinglish建议再写英文时可以参考下谷歌翻译的翻译结果。
