封闭式培训英语作文高中

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.We have different ideas about that.Now let me tell you our opinions. Some of us hold the idea that if the school keep us all day long ,our freedom will be limited.Moreover,we may lose a lot of social opportunities.Besides,we can't develop our interests and hobbies well. One coin has two sides,some students thingk that school is a space to learn the knowledge,the only thing we should do is staying there to study.What's more,because we lack self�awareness,without the guide of teachers,we may make mistakes. In my view,it would be better that school don't keep us in school all day long.After all ,textbook knowledge is not the only thing we should learn.

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It is well-known that some schools nowadays uses closed-off management to manage their students.About this phenomenon,different people have different opinions. Some students think that schools use this method to limit their freedom,and result in they have less contacts with society.they also think they can't develop their own hobbies sufficiently,so they don't approve this kind of management.But others think that school is a place where you learn things,students should spend their whole attention on study.Students are lack of conscious,they need teachers to take care of them,both physically and spiritually. In my opinion,closed-off management is good for students,because they need to focus on studying,and their age depends that they can't resist all kinds of allurs in society,they can be easily influenced by them.So adults like parents and teacher shloud give them a simple environment for them to grow up.So,I think closed-off management is a good and effctive way to raise children right.

Possible version:Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it.Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have less interest in their studies. Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies. Personally, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life. (I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests范文，稍微改改。