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正式的邮件中不要用缩略词 don't要写成 do not.如果是免费午餐,建议说明。如:There will be a free lunch for you tomorrow.If you do not need lunch ,please contact me with e-mial before 9:30a.m. 5th June.2017.Look forward to your arrival。整体语法还行,就是有点Chinglish建议再写英文时可以参考下谷歌翻译的翻译结果。
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