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正式的邮件中不要用缩略词 don't要写成 do not.如果是免费午餐,建议说明。如:There will be a free lunch for you tomorrow.If you do not need lunch ,please contact me with e-mial before 9:30a.m. 5th June.2017.Look forward to your arrival。整体语法还行,就是有点Chinglish建议再写英文时可以参考下谷歌翻译的翻译结果。

申请培训邮件英语

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看了你写的内容,其实你的英语一点都不差。很多表达都已经到位了。在这里,我给点自己的意见,修改并完善了一些措辞。请参考: Titl: Application for a Color Design Training CourseDear James,I write to you to apply for the NCS color design training course. Probably, you know this course. I think that more professional color design skills will be of great use to improve my work quality and efficiency. Recently, there is a term from March 4th to 8th and it costs 4800 RMB. I hope that you can seriously consider my application and give me this chance to attend the course.Looking forward to your reply at your convenience.Best Regards,Ella

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