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帮你修改了错句，文章如下：Now, all kinds of modern architecture marked the emergence of a number of well-known place of the old buildings. Some people think that engineers should be through the traditional way of building a building, this argument may be true. In different countries, ancient architecture and traditional architectural style is a symbol of the country to show their national culture and customs. If the mystery of Egypt's pyramids. In addition, those mysterious buildings will be broadcast on television or published. As a result, many people have wanted to go there first. So that they can communicate with local residents access to information. In addition, tourism can speed up local economic development, to make it more eye-catching. More importantly, if the real estate companies dismantled a number of old people living in the house, the community may find confusion. On the other hand, there are various different points of view. Compared with traditional architecture, modern architectural design simpler and more practical. We also enjoy some of the modern hotel-the-art equipment and comfortable environment. In addition, because of the spirit of innovation is a driving force for the city and state, the designers chose to not only the structure of modern materials, but also changes in architectural style. In addition, the BA London Eye is like the structure and a number of old buildings, such as Big Ben and Parliament buildings, but also charming and design of the structure. It is likely to attract more people travel to visit. In short, no matter what kind of structures can give us inspiration. In addition, the Government has the responsibility to maintain the balance between new and old, have to make better use of the structure of the ancient style of the essence.
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题目是：many buildings are appearing in large numbers ,some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. to what extent do you agree or disagree Nowadays ,a wide various of modern buildings have appeared significantly and instant of numerous famous ancient buildings .some people think that engineers should construct the architecture in a traditional way ,this arguments may be true .in different countries ,ancient buildings and the traditional architecture styles are the symbol to reveal their countries’ culture and custom .such as the pyramids for the mystery of ancient Egyptian. Also, those mysterious architectures will be announced on the television or broadcast .as a result of it ,numerous tourisms would like to have a travel (tour) there. so they can communicate information with located (local) people .furthermore substantial traveling will improved local area’s’ economy dramatically . Importantly, if real estate company composed demolishing some old house where the elderly people lived, maybe it is a tensive situation between them ,which will make society chaotic. On the other hand ,there are various aspects against these arguments .comparing with traditional building ,modern one is more simplicity (simple) and practicality (practical) .we also enjoy the modern atmosphere comfortably in some modern hotels .moreover, since innovation is a spirit for a city and nations ,so designer not only select the modern structure materials ,but also shift the building style. In addition ,just like BA London Eye structure among many ancient buildings ,such as the Big Ben and Parliament House, also is a fascinating structural style. Maybe it will attract more tourists to have a trip there. In conclusion ,no matter what kinds of structures which could bring lots of advantages for us .Furthermore ,government has a responsibility to keep a balance between new and old ,also architecture would better to accumulate the essence in ancient structure styles.已在原文中做了修改，分数5.5(北京启德雅思Kiya老师修改）
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