英语作文改错文章

Today I got up at six o 'clock. I went to (play sports on the playground) with my friends at half past six. In the playground we were running and playing (a ballgame). We were very happy. And we met many classmates. We said "hello" to each other. We had breakfast together. And then (I) went home. (Playing) sports is really a happy thing.Play sports是固定的用法 如果你要表示 进行体育运动的话·你之后说play ball我的理解是你想说玩球类运动 所以帮你改为了play a ballgame别的没有什么大问题··有问题可以问我哦

Dear David How is it going? I had a good time in this summer when visitting the Taishan, the highest mountain in Shandong Province,with my classmates. Happy and joy,we arrived at the foot of the Taishan.The walk path to the mountain was much more challenging than what we expected before. Tired as we were,we didn't give up. We overcame many diffculties with passersbys' selflessness help. Finally,we reached the top of Taishan.the beautiful scenes in our eyes made us felt proud. Now,this is my experience of this summer.How about you?I'm looking forward to your reply.不好意思没时间了下午还有考试希望本英语只能得143的渣的回答对你有帮助！

1.started改成began，固定搭配 2.by+名词，后面不能加定冠词 3.hesawa catbehindawoman不能用behind做方位名词，这样翻译容易错。应该改为 hesawawomaninfrontofthecat 4.whenhewasgoingtoworkbyacar这样是中式翻译，这样是不对的。应该改成Whenhewasdrivingtowork. 5.thecat suddenlystartedtoacrosstheroad的startedto去掉，across用法也错了，应该为Thecatsuddenlycrossingtheroad此句包含动作进行当中，无需加startedto，也是中式翻译。 6.thecarhitsthepooranimal的意思是“车子打击了可怜的动物”，其中的hits应改为hit，定冠词the要改为a，改正后应该为：thecarhitapooranimal。 意思为：车撞了可怜的动物。

第一篇：Friend relationships(Friendship) can take different forms,but it is usual for close friends share(to share) similar ideas and interests.It generally take(takes) time to reach this point. And the closest(closer) people become,the more they rely on one(each) other.People want to do friends favours and hate to break a promise.(见括号内)第二篇：The elephant is （the) largest living land animal and one of the cleverest,and yet elephants are rather easy(easily) captured.They are very near_sight(near-sighted) and can not see anything clearly unless it is close to them .Hunter take(takes) advantage of this to get near(to) the elephant which they are wish to capture.(见括号内)

一 1.share 前加to2.interests 改为 interestes3.take 改为 takes4. become 前加 they5.one 改为 each二，1.largest 前加the2.cleverest hou 加animals3. easy 改为 easily4.take 改为takes5.去掉wish 前的are4.

Dear David How are you doing? I had a good time this summer. I had visited the TaiShanMountainwith my classmates that is the highest mountain inShandongProvince. We arrived at the bottom of the Tai Shan and during the journey we told many jokes. The way to the mountain is hard. Although tired, we didn't give up. We overcame many difficulties with the help of the passers-bys.Finally, we arrived the top of Tai Shan, where we saw many beautiful scenes. We felt very happy. Now, I've told my experience of this summer. How about you? I'm looking forward to your reply!Daer David How are you? I'm writing the email to you about my summer vacation. I , with my friend, went to Taihan in the summer vacation. Taishan is the highest mountain inShandongProvince. It is also famous all around theChina. We are delighted to travel there for a tour. The mountain path is difficult for us to climb through. Although we are very exhausted, we didn't give up during the journey. Eventually, we arrived at the mountain peak. The environment is good. We saw a lot of variety of plants, such as flowers, green trees. Although we don't know there names, it’s fun to see them.

第一行，过往经历应该用复数吧。第三行，expressitclearlyinEnglish第四行，study应该是不及物动词，应该改为learned，把time去掉。hardly意思是几乎不，不是刻苦。第五行，Englishspokenbeabletodo我只能找出这些。还有就是你的英文过于中国化，建议你多读英文文章，找找感觉，积累词汇，多说，多写。加油吧！