泷泷大魔王
1.She told my sister that she is wrong. (这样的情况下,一般用is,was显得比较别扭)2.Li Bai was one of the greatest poets.3.Looking up at the sky, a bird is flying round the tree.4.His brother wants either to study American literature or study English literature.5.Tom is one the students who refuses to accept the invitation to the party.6.She was knocked down by a bike, but it was not serious.7.Upon entering the room, no one was seen. (使用On不通顺,是病语)8.Over the past few years, the city has nearly built 1000 houses.9.He lost his purse and soon found it. The police helped him. (his比a更贴切)10.Packed in a box, the typist could not find the machine.我帮你看了一下语法,没有太多错误
Sophie小蕉
1)she told my sister that she was wrong (confusing, who was wrong? She? Or my sister?) 改成:she admitted to my sister .....(自己承认)。或 she pointed out to my sister....(指出)2)Li Bai was one of the greatest poets3) looking up the sky, I saw a bird was flying round the tree.4) his brother wants to study either American literature or English literature.5) Tom is one of the students who refuses to accept the invitation to the party.6) she was knocked down by the bike but she was not seriously hurt7) Upon entering the room, no one was seen there.8) Over the past few years, there were nearly 1000 houses builted in the city.10) the machine was packed in a box, the typist could not find it. 原本意思是 the typist is packed in box,那不是原意吧!9)he lost the purse, and found it shortly, the police helped him. Soon 改成shortly比较恰当
念念1218
1.She told my sister that she was wrong. (对)2.Li Bai was one of the greatest poets.(对)3.Looking up at the sky ,a bird was flying round the tree. (其中一种改法:Looking up at the sky , I saw a bird flying round the tree. 注:looking up 的动作发出者应该是人,且要与主句的主语相一致。)4.His brother wants either to study American literature or study English literature.(应该成:His brother wants to study either American literature or English literature.)5.Tom is one the students who refuses to accept the invitation to the party.(refuses应该去掉s。one of the+复数名词+从句。注:从句的谓语动词应与前面结构中的复数名词保持一致。)6.She was knocked down by a bike,but it was not serious. (去掉but后面的it,这里应该是she,但可以省略。)7.On entering the room,no one was seen.(其中一种改法:When she entered...)8.Over the past few years,the city has nearly built 1000 houses.(其中一种改法:Over the past few years, nearly 1000 houses have been built in the city.)9.He lost a purse and soon found it.The police helped him. (对,要是中国考试也许会认定这个题太罗嗦云云,其实老外在文章中也有如此行文的。)10.Packed in a box,the typist could not find the machine. (其中一种改法:They packed it in...)仅供参考,如有纰漏,请高手指教,谢谢。
巧克力麦乳精
我的理解,答案是有道理的。many是主语,相当于many meetings,那么表语就该落在unproductive上,而不应该落在results上面,换言之,“会议”不应该是“结果”,而行表述为:会议是没有结果的(unproductive就够了)。我说明白了没有?
yyy777777777777777
1.She told my sister that she HAD BEEN wrong. ("had been wrong" takes place prior to "told")2. Libai IS one of the greatest poets. (When talking about literature, always use simple tense)3. Looking up at the sky, I SAW a bird flying around the tree. (typical misplaced modifier question)4. His brother wants to study EITHER AMERICAN OR ENGLISH LITERATURE. (parallelism issue)5. Tom is one of the students who REFUSE to accept the invitation to the party.6. She was knocked down by a bike, ALTHOUGH SHE WASN'T INJURED. ("it" is an ambiguous pronoun)7. UPON entering the room, I SAW no one. (misplaced modifier and diction problem)8. Over the past years, the city has built NEARLY 1000 houses. (mispositioning of the word "nearly")9. He had lost a purse and soon found it because the police helped him. ("HAD LOST" happens before found)10. The typist cannot find the machine which is packed in a box. (A misplaced modifier question)