英语作文语法改错

My Idea about TourismIn recent years, as the process of urbanization and industrialization isspeeding up in China, people will face more and more stress. At this time theywill choose travel to relax. In the meanwhile, tourism becomes more and morepopular in our country. As for me, I support the advocate of the tourism.Generally speaking, I think the advantages of the travel outweigh thedisadvantages. The obvious reason that make people like travel, first of all,is broadening their minds and sights. What’s more, people will have colorful lifebecause of the travel. Secondly, it’s important to keep the relationshipsbetween friends, colleagues and cooperators, and to travel is one of the bestways for us, so traveling plays an important role in our life. Thirdly, on onehand, tourism represents the development of the economy in our country, on theother hand, tourism pushes the development of the economy, and we’ll alsobenefit from the tourism. Therefore, tourism, as one of the third industries,is also an emerging industry in China.In conclusion, I am for the advocate of the tourism. Although most of peoplehave never realized the disadvantages of the tourism until they read some badnews in the newspapers or on the Internet, I still believe that our governmentwill make measure to protect our scenic spots and historical sites. The futureis big time for the tourist industry.只是略微改了下不太顺口的地方，也不专业，希望能帮到你

AI Grammar这个英语语法改错app还不错，差不多是国内第一款自制的语法改错软件吧，支持苹果和安卓手机，暂时没有PC端。

动词时态转换、主谓不一致、冠词代词连词名词错误都可以自动纠正，总体来说精准度比较高，有的还提供语法解析，不过目前还是英文的解析，后面应该会增加中文解析。

改正后：My favorite band is The Cranberries， they are a great band from Ireland. I love groups that play different kinds of music. Sometimes, they play music that's loud and energetic and sometimes, they play music that is quiet and gentle.Their songs are very amazing,the unique voices and the beautiful melody deeply interested me. I think their songs make us feel happy and relaxed,makes us full of energy and full of hope about the future. 注：我用的是美式语法