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漫画类型的 作文 是我们经常会遇到的 英语写作 题型,学好它对我们有利无害。下面是我给大家整理的漫画英语 范文 ,供大家参阅! 漫画英语范文1 Confucius said: "the three of us are walking together, must have my teacher. " Each of us has its own advantages, but also has its own disadvantages, learning from others to make up their own short, long, of course, has its significance. As just looking at our own advantages, to see the strengths of others, will make the proud. However, only to see the strengths of others, will only be blind to learn from others, is that right? Ever hear of such a fable: there is a young lion, determined to become a most perfect lion. Later, it found a lion in the long distance running endurance than weak antelope. So he decided to learn antelope graze to increase endurance, finally the lion for grazing and become physical depletion. 漫画英语范文2 请观察下图,请以“Where is my home?”为题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。内容包括: 1.简述图所反映的两个环境问题; 2.简析成因; 3.发表自己的看法。 注: 文章 的开头已经给出,不计人词数;参考词汇:口罩mask 英语范文: Where is my home? Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight! Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection. Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening. 漫画英语范文3 DIRECTIONS: A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words. B. Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET II. C. Your essay should meet the requirements below: 解析:漫画中,母鸡下蛋后十分骄傲的表情,并吹嘘到:“本母鸡下的蛋没有棱角,保证有蛋皮,蛋清,蛋黄。”可见,母鸡为之骄傲和吹嘘的事情实为分内之事,无须大势渲染。正如,“如此承诺”中概括的一样:各行各业兴承诺,欢迎监督不推脱,原本皆为分内事,何须高唱文明歌。综上所述,漫画主题为“承诺分内事”。 (2)根据要求(direction),确定文章段落的数量和段落的内容,即文章的提纲。 解析:1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon. 2. Give your comments 根据提纲中的信息1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon. 本文开头需要两个段落,即客观描述漫画段,引出暗含主题段。 根据提纲中的信息2. Give your comments 本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论,即持有该观点的原因和最后得出的结论。即,文章由四个段落组成:客观描述漫画段—主题段—原因段—对策段。 (3)根据提纲要求,利用恰当语句组段成篇。 SAMPLE As is shown in the cartoon, the hen that has just laid an egg is shouting, with her head raised high, "I ensure that my egg brings no corners and that it consists of such three parts as eggshell, egg white and yolk." What I've mentioned above is the surface messages conveyed by the cartoon. It seems from the hen's proud look that she is expected to make a promise for the egg she lays. It fact, it is clear that the hen promises what turns out to be her own duty. There are some possible reasons for this common social phenomenon. For one thing, the social competition is becoming so fierce that all trades tend to produce ads to make themselves better known to the public. For another, they're not prepared to face the challenge and as a result, they can do little except declare their own duty as something praiseworthy. In my opinion, every trade should try every means to improve its competitive forces instead of boasting like the hen in the cartoon. Therefore, I draw my conclusion that just as a hen shouldn't promise for her egg, so no trade in the society should boast themselves for something within their duty and that they should work hard to provide more benefits for the society. In a word, try not to be like the boasting hen in our life! 不难发现,要想写出一篇高分作文须具备两个条件:一是扎实的英语语言基础,尤其是书写语句的基础;二是掌握一定的写作技巧,重点在于写作的步骤与流程。即, 步骤一、利用漫画提炼主题。根据漫画场景、人物表情以及文字提示等信息,综合把握漫画所传递的信息,确定文章的中心思想。 步骤二、利用direction的要求安排文章结构。文章写几段,每段写什么内容完全取决于direction的要求,一定要做到客观。 步骤三、恰当语句组段成篇。利用中心思想和文章结构来组织语句,组织篇章。

变革英语作文漫画

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遇到漫画类的英语作文,我们应该从哪个方面开始写起?下面是我给大家整理的漫画类的英语作文怎么写,供大家参阅!

第一段:描述图画(Part 1 Describe the picture)

1. The picture is talking about/shows…

2. The picture shows a common phenomenon.

3. The picture describes an interesting

phenomenon.

4. In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing… 5. The picture above is about … 6. …Let’s look at the picture above/first. 第二段:解释,说明和分析图片 (Part 2 Interpret the picture) It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… The picture indicate that we… Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…

第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法 (Part 3 Give your opinions)

1. I think/believe that 5. …should…

2. As far as I’m concerned, 6. It is better/advisable to…

3. In my opinion, 7. I consider it necessary…

4. From my point of view,

写作模板:

As is vividly shown in the picture/pictures(drawing/drawings) above, 图画的内容 。The picture/pictures(drawing/drawings)tells/tell us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。

The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。 Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.

In my view / point of view (or As for me), We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1. And then we have to / must 具体的措施

一.漫画作文概述

高考英语考试说明写作部分第二节表述为:“要求考生根据所给情景,用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文(山东卷为120—150词)。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等;提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。

因此,图画是高考作文所提供的情景之一。从最近几年高考试题来看,图画类作文占据了相当大的比重,当然主要是以记叙文为主。而漫画又是图画的表现形式之一。漫画的含义是:漫画是一种具有强烈的讽刺性或幽默性的图画。画家从生活现象中取材,通过夸张、比喻、象征等手法,来讽刺、批评或表扬某些人和事。它与图画相比,更能够与社会现实紧密结合起来,在大学英语四六级考试和研究生英语入学考试中应用的较为广泛。同时在高考中出现的频率也越来越高,例如在上海卷、北京卷及山东卷中都出现过漫画作文。

二.漫画作文的特点

1.试题命题特点

漫画作文的主要特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它就要求考生在写作时做到主题明确,即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想。

2.能力考查特点

漫画作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力、丰富的想象力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力,以及最终将以上能力表达出来的书面表达能力。

三.漫画作文的写作思路

一般的漫画作文一般可分为三个步骤,即:

1)describe the drawing briefly.

2) explain its intended meaning and give examples(if necessary)

3)give your own comments or opinions

各部分常用的表达

描述图画部分:

1)From the cartoon we can see that„

2) As is shown/indicated in the picture

3)This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see„

4)Look at the picture. It is a picture about„

论述漫画寓意及所反映现象部分

1) What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s society./ Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.

2) This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

3) What the cartoon reflects set me thinking a lot.

4)After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today’s society,„

5)The cartoon implies that„„

评论与观点部分

1)As far as I’m concerned, what we have to do is to make full use of„„and also„„If we„„and„„, it will not only„„but also„„

2)We can learn from the picture that

3)Consequently, it is high time that measures should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from happening again.

4)Therefore, I am firmly convinced that„

5) Let’s call on everybody to„„In the long run, it will have a negative influence on constructing a harmonious society.

在写作时,可以用以下的问题问自己!

1. What’s the type of the writing? ___________

A.说明文 B. 书信 C. 夹叙夹议 D.人物传记

2. What’s the tense and person of the writing? ___________

3. 在写漫画类作文时,应认真审题,注重文章结构。

The writing contains there parts: _________________ (简要描述漫画内容)、__________________(说明漫画所反映的社会现状)、__________________(发表自己的观点和看法)。

1) How many people can you see?

2) What are they doing?

3) Whose behavior is to blame first?

4) What does the cartoon reflect?

4. What’s the tone of the author? ___________

A. subjective B. objective C. critical D. indifferent

5. Pay attention to beautiful expressions in the passage

(1 ) Description of cartoon: _________________________________________________ (2 ) Reflection of cartoon: _________________________________________________

(3 ) Author’s opinion: _________________________________________________

【专题分析】

根据图画内容,以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题,用英语写一篇0词左右的短文。120—150词的短文。

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and a woman is doing some exercise.

The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will lose some weight.”

As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless. We do hope our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.

【范文分析】

范文包含了以下要点1)简单描述漫画的内容;2)作业负担过重;老师精讲精练;3)参加体育锻炼和社会活动。

本文思路清晰,表达准确,层次分明。文章运用了大量的高级词汇、短语及句型(见文章划线部分),语言地道,上下文连贯。恰当的运用了过渡性的连接词语,是一篇质量上乘的范文。

五.专题训练

根据下面图中的相关信息写一篇以“成才之路”为题的短文。

要求:1.写作应包括图示要点;

2.针对图示所反映的问题,发表自己的观点和看法。

The Road to Success As it is depicted in the cartoon, a small child is driven to play the piano.The child is nervous, reluctant and unhappy, but he has to do what he doesn’t want to because his parents have whips in their hands and even the teacher also has one.It is a long way to gain success. Every child has the right to enjoy a happy-go-lucky childhood.Under such a circumstance of China nowadays, all the children face the painful road to success.On the one hand, we want to live a happy life in the future, we have to study hard. On the other hand, is it really worthwhile to gain so-called fame at the cost of the happiness of childhood?

In my opinion, what we have to do is try our best to do what we can and make full use of our time.We only hope the next generation will have more free time to do what they like.

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