a416066323
With the rapid development of the economy, pollution has become one of the most serious problems nowadays. The emission of greenhouse gases not only results in more and more CO2 in the atmosphere but also keeps the temperature going up. It has many harmful effects on human beings and nature, such as the rise of sea levels, many natural disasters and so on.Therefore, it’s time to take steps to make a difference. First of all, we should save energy .We should turn off the lights, the TV ,the computer and so on if we are not using them any longer. We can walk or ride a bike when we go out instead of using motor vehicles. Secondly, we should plant more trees as they absorb carbon dioxide from the air and refresh our spirit when we look at them. Finally and most importantly, we should talk with our family and friends about global warming to raise people’s awareness of the importance of protecting the environment. 试题分析：本文属于提纲来短文，同时也是议论文。使用第三人称为主与一般现在时。要点为：1.全球气候变暖是目前人类面临的最大的环境问题之一。2.温室气体的排放导致大气层中二氧化碳的含量越来越高，温度升高。3.海平面急剧上升，自然灾害频繁等。4.措施：节约能源；绿化环境；提高公众意识。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。【亮点分析】本文的亮点在于连接词的使用，如：first of all, secondly, finally and most importantly；另外一些高级词汇运用也很多，如atmosphere；take steps；make a difference；raise people’s awareness of；absorb carbon dioxide。
新津东方
1）电的重要性 Electricity plays a very important role in our daily life.2）如何节约用电 Firstly,… Secondly…，lastly…3）号召 If each of us tries our best to save electricity, we will make big difference.Let's take action right now.
lingling8826
Today our environment is a very important problem. Rveryone shouid protect the environment.I have some ideas for you .For example ,you could use energy-saving lamp to save the electricity .By the way,if you left you room,you should turn off the lamp.As for water ,when we wash the hair we can turn off the shower fittings. And you shouid use the paper again and again.You can send you own books to the students of lower grades. There also have some probiems about paper napkins.I think people can get handkerchiefs to use and we should piant more and more trees. The fifth is you should have your own bags while you are shopping.You shouldn't use plastic bags. Finaly ,i hope everybody don't drive cars,they can walk and by bikes.Walking is also good for our healthy. If we do this ,we will have a wonderfui environmeng! 本人是初三党，英语成绩较好，但是文章不免也会有些语法错误，如果你有意见欢迎指出。
typical2006
你好！我不知道是否大家都知道“节能”和“低碳”这两个词的含义？我想大家是理所当然的知道。“节能”不就是节约能源？“低碳”不就是减少碳的排放吗？对，就是这么简单。我们常常聊它们。但是，你真正的理解它们吗？它们已经在你的心底深深地扎根了吗？曾经，地球母亲给我们留下了丰富的能源使我们欢呼，感叹地球上的能源取之不尽用之不竭。现在，最新的调查表明，60年以后石油将会枯竭，煤炭也只能供应人类250年。曾经，注重发展第一，环境问题常被人忽略，现在，可持续发展与自然和谐共处是最大的话题。不难发现，环境问题不断地被人们提起。尽管如此，环境问题仍然严峻，节能减排，低碳生活紧迫。在哥本哈根气候代表大会，这影响人类命运的问题无法达成协议….. 后面的不想翻译了 根本就有点文法不通 郁闷
