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Nowadays,many parents have prepared everything for their children from their births.So these children's self-care abilities are gradually held in contempt by many parents.More and more children know nothing about housework such as mopping,cleaning and so forth,and what's more,some children can't peel eggs.The prevalence of the problem has become a hot button across society.Its existence has even greatly impacted the future of our country which the government could not afford to ignore and prepare to take some positive measures to come up with the problem,according to the online edition of the people daily. There are a couple of driving forces,I would argue,behind this undesirable tide.On one hand,in these parents' eyes,only study score plays a significant role during all life of kids so that they ignore education in other aspects such as moral education.On the other hand,with the implementation of family-planning policy,children are only children nowadays,the care and doting that they received exceed their fathers and grandfathers, so their dependence is relatively large. As confucius instructed,it is better late than never.Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend.To help their children to be independent,parents should resist the urge to jump in and give their children more responsibilitys and decision-making powers so that they may develop an internal locus of contol.In addition ,parents can teach their children to ask for what they need and support them in being accountable for their decisions.Finally,parents can set clear boundaries and provide their children with advice and guidance.It is beneficial for the child to make decisions and learn from their mistakes.I believe that so long as it is properly and carefully operated,we are bound to modify this evil trend in the days ahead.hehe, you are very modest and special in your writing. If I don't guess wrongly, your major is English. I am quite pleased with what you have written. There are few mistakes in your writing. You can use some fixed phrases properly.Thank. I appreciate it very much!Contact me if you like. QQ136140008Wish you success in your study！