换手机英语

写作思路：按题目要求，写出手机不满意，要求换货或退款，注意语法不要错。

正文：

Dear Sir

尊敬的先生

I'm writing to tell you about my experience in your store.

我写信是想告诉你我在你们商场的经历。

Three days ago, I just got the mobile phone I ordered from your store.

三天前，我刚从你们店里买了一部手机。

You sent it on time and thanks for that.

你按时寄来的，谢谢。

But I found several problems.

但我发现了几个问题。

First, the color is not what I wanted.

首先，颜色不是我想要的。

I wanted golden, but you gave me silver instead.

我想要金色，但你给了我银色。

I thought that would be OK, if everything else is good enough.

我想如果其他一切都足够好的话，那就没问题了。

The stranger thing happens.

奇怪的事情发生了。

The mobile phone gets five minutes slower every day, so I have to keep correcting it.

手机每天慢了五分钟，所以我得一直修正它。

Because of this, I feel nervous about being late for work.

因此，我总感觉上班迟到感到紧张。

I really cannot stand it any longer.

我真的受不了了。

I would like you to change my mobile phone. Or give me the money back.

我想让你换一下我的手机。或者把钱退给我。

Along with the letter is the copy of the order.

随信附上的是订单副本。

Thank you. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

非常感谢。我期待着您的回音。

Yours sincerely

谨上

i want my mobile-phone be exchanged or be paid refund.

He took out his computer and exchanged it for cellphone

你好，这个当然是可以的啦你可以直接选择退款的。退货退款也是可以达到要求的你只要到时候同意对方的退款申请，款直接到对方账户了维权也就结束了！