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在日常学习、工作抑或是生活中,说到作文,大家肯定都不陌生吧,写作文可以锻炼我们的独处习惯,让自己的心静下来,思考自己未来的方向。还是对作文一筹莫展吗?下面是我为大家收集的英文作文7篇,欢迎阅读,希望大家能够喜欢。

If I am a cloud.At a time when the land of drought,people rise into the sky cried:"Baiyun you,please you to get together quickly,give us a heavy rain under it." Deeply moved by these words my heart,I have to think of by "If the clouds are."

If I am a white clouds,sunrise time,I have to let the sun shine on me,it turned into a red roses; into a mighty lion,so that people gave me put an exclamation point.

If I were a white clouds,I will be blown up big desert.At this time,perhaps my is a grandfather of more than 60-year-old body can not afford to step one before,and issued a weak mouth,"water,water ." sound,dying to go thirsty.I am sad to shed a drop of tears,tears that drip Jingying to escape grandfather die clearance.Grandfather to see his smile,than the hearts of people ate honey sweet also.

At a time when the land of drought,people rise into the sky cried:"Baiyun Baiyun you,please you to get together quickly,give us a heavy rain under it." Deeply moved by these words my heart,I have to think of by "If 1 clouds are." If I were a white clouds,sunrise time,I have to let the sun shine on me,it turned into a red roses; into a mighty lion,so that people gave me put an exclamation point.If I were a white clouds,I will be blown up big desert.At this time,perhaps my is a grandfather of more than 60-year-old body can not afford to step one before,and issued a weak mouth,"water,water ." sound,dying to go thirsty.I am sad to shed a drop of tears,tears that drip Jingying to escape grandfather die clearance.Grandfather to see his smile,than the hearts of people ate honey sweet also.If a person is white clouds,the hot sun at the time,into the rain,so that people can keep cool.White clouds,white clouds...Then at me as if the sky blue,and explore the mysteries of it for people to contribute.

learning english is much more than a fad; it is really a must! let's take a look around us: the latest information around the world is written in or translated into english. to keep up with the ever-changing world, we must be equipped with a good command of english. from a more practical point of view, armed english is one of the most important required subjects for the university and high school entrance exam. to do well on the exam, we must, again, study hard to score high in the subject.

frankly, my english is not good. but i have been doing my best to improve my english in order to pass the college entrance examination .in my case, i force myself to memorize at least a few new words every day because a large vocabulary is essential in learning english well. second, i review some grammar rules every week, which helps me make fewer mistakes in writing english. third, i read short articles and then write an english composition every other day.

i hope to get high marks in both reading and writing. now my english is improving day by day, and i hope i can do well in the english test for the coming college examination.

写作解题时间为30分钟,分为三步:5分钟审题和构思,20分钟写作,5分钟检查可能犯的错误。下面分步骤说明。

(一)审题和构思

事实上提供给写作的时间不止30分钟。一般来说,各考场会提前5分钟左右将答题卡一发到学生手里,大一点的考场甚至可能提前10分钟发卷。这5到10分钟不允许学生作答,但考生完全可以用来做作文部分的审题和构思工作。注意审题一定要仔细,按要求写作,不得擅自改动题目,给定的提纲不得有遗漏,否则会按比例扣分。尤其注意,不要因为事先自己背过或练过哪篇相似的文章而死搬硬套。否则后果很严重。如,20xx年12月六级写作真题题目是College Students’ Mental Health,提纲为

1. 心理健康对于大学生很重要

2. 鉴于此,学校可以……

3. 我们自己应该……”

而在考试之前我出过一道类似的模拟题,题目为“Psychological Problems Among College Students”, 提纲为

1. 很多大学生有严重的心理问题

2. 产生这些问题的原因

3. 如何解决这些问题”

可以看出,我给的提纲是按照比较规矩的三段论来的,即“提出问题、分析问题、解决问题”。但真题的提纲并未要求考生分析问题,反倒有两段要写解决问题。有的考生因为看过或背过模拟题的范文,就直接照搬,导致了失分。

另外,构思不是打草稿。并不建议学生练习写作时养成打草稿的习惯。因为考场上时间有限,打完草稿再誊写很可能来不及。另外,更重要的原因是考场上不发草稿纸,一般也不允许往里带纸,难以找到打草稿的地方。考生只要花三五分钟做一下构思即可,即想象一下每段大致写什么,可以记几个关键词(比如在准考证空白的地方)提示自己,在接下来的二十分钟里面按照这几个关键词提示的内容扩展就行。一般来说,要求不少于150词的文章最好写到180到200词,就句子数目来说,如果分三段,每段也就三到五句话,平均四句一段。那么整篇文章大约10个关键词就可以做好构思。以20xx年6月六级写作真题为例。

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1. 有人说名字(或名称)很重要

2. 也有人觉得名字(或名称)无关紧要

3. 我认为……

构思第一段时,想到可以来一句铺垫的话,如“名字重不重要是个有争议的话题”,可以写下controversial或topic,作为关键词;下一句是“有人说名字(或名称)很重要”,可以先写下important。再往后想两条理由或例证即可。理由如“好名字容易被记住,因而可以给人来更多机会”(关键词remember或opportunity),和“按照传统理论起的名字可能会对人起到暗中庇护的作用”(关键词tradition或shelter);例证如“有人认为毛泽东伟大是因为名字就大气,Bill Gates有钱是因为他的名字可以表示钞票,姓表示很多大门,很多大门都来钱,所以有钱”。第二、三段情同此理。其实第一段想好了,后两段也就容易了。比如第二段可以将第一段的理由或例证反过来用,第三段可以总结或折中一下。字数还是比较容易写够的。

(二)写作

写作的过程当中,要注意这样几条高分策略。

字迹清楚,段落明朗(clear):字体不要太大,也不要太小,以行间距的三分之一到二分之一为合适;另外,大小要一致,不要忽大忽小;字母的倾斜方向要一致,不要东倒西歪;要抵着给出的虚线写,不能上窜下跳;总之,要给阅卷人清楚、工整的感觉。段落一般为三段,采用段首缩进式,即每段开头空4至8个字母的格,每段段首缩进的量要一致,要让阅卷人一目了然。

内容完整,紧扣提纲(complete):一般来说,六级写作都会给出三点汉语提纲,考生应严格按照三点写成三段。不要有遗漏,也不要随意改变提纲要点的顺序。因为阅卷人要在30秒左右的时间打出分数,所以不希望看到与提纲严重背离的作文。

首保正确,再求闪光(correct):这一条是最核心的,因为在写作时间和篇幅都比较短的情况下,考生写出的内容几乎是一样的,唯一的判断标准几乎就是语言的质量。要首先保证语法和拼写正确,哪怕用小词、短句也可以。有能力的的话再追求闪光的词句。例如,有考生在写20xx年6月的作文时,写出了这样的开头句:There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China. 这句话是套用我以往范文给过的句子,基本结构是对的,但有两处明显的错误。一处为vital,是个形容词,而这里应该用名词。作者可能想用一个牛词来替换importance以显示用词多样,结果弄巧成拙。另外一处错误为name之前应该有冠词a,其实题目中都给了,结果这位同学忽略了,缺乏基本的语法意识。其实作文中常犯的语法错误除了冠词错误,还包括时态错误、名词和动词单复数错误、代词不一致错误、词性错误以及句子主谓不完整错误。下笔时一定要谨慎。篇幅关系这里不能赘述。

先总后分,连词用上(coherent):这里说的是段落的`结构和连贯性的问题。英语文章特别喜欢先总后分或开门见山的格局,另外,段落之间和句子之间的形式连接手段特别明显,即关联词用的很多。在写作的时候,几乎就是把给出的三点提纲作为每段的开头句,然后再加上两三个扩展句即理由或例证句就可以了。当然有时候为了论证自然或扩展字数也可以加上一点铺垫的句子。如20xx年6月真题作文开头一句既可以是Some people claim that names are of great importance. 也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not. 然后再说Some hold the positive view.后面再加上两三句论证的话。论证句或扩展句之间最好有连接词,如First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。

语言简练,论据得当(concise):不要啰嗦,不要过于重复和堆砌。有些考生背诵了一些经典的句型,为了凑字就全用上了,给人低层次的感觉。如最后一段用同学写道:As far as I am concerned, weighing the pros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. 其实As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一个就行了。另外,尽管内容不及语言重要,但也肯定会影响分数的。考生应尽量平时多练,以期在考场上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和贴切的例证。另外,要敢于表达自己的思想,不要一味地为了保证语言正确而裹步不前,只说一些小学生的话。如有同学写09年真题第一段时写道:Some people think that names are important. They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him. If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him. 这样的作文倒是没有语言错误,但肯定也得不了高分。

(三)检查

其实考生应该在下笔写作的时候就谨慎,仔细,避免错误,但即便这样,错误也是会有的,包括语法和拼写错误,尤其对于平时缺乏练习的同学来说。那么就需要留几分钟通读一下,检查和改正。注意,要改的是一些语法或拼写错误,而不是作内容上的大的改动,换言之,是改一些词或词组,而不是改整个句子或段落,因为那样会造成卷面混乱,导致低分。要想避免内容上的错误,构思时就要想好,落笔时就要谨慎。还有改正错误要注意方式,尽量不要用涂改液或涂改带,以免有作弊嫌疑,也不要在一个词上涂画太多,影响卷面整洁。一般可以用一条斜线划掉错词,然后在其上方写出正确的,或者用胶带或刀片之类轻轻将错词去掉,然后在原位置写出正确的。

冲刺方略

即使到考前剩的时间不多,写作也是大有可为的。要做的事情有两件,一个是背,一个是练。

背主要是背范文,从实战出发,可以背模拟题的范文。背的目的有两个,一是掌握一些常用的经典句型,在考场上应急,另外是学习范文的思路和文章结构,以期为己所用。背不要贪多,一种类型的文章背一篇也就差不多。如果按我课上讲的把作文分为五大类,那差不多背五篇就行。而且实在不能一字不差的背下来也不要太担心,背下大部分就行。其实,与背范文同样重要的是背诵一些自己在阅读里看到的比较有感觉的好词好句,那样可以避免与别人写成一样的。

练也是练模拟题,因为考过的写作真题再考的可能性几乎是没有的。数量大约5到10篇,也就是每种类型一到两篇。练的时候可以用背诵过的模板,但最好还是能用自己的话,不敢肯定的话可以写完之后去查查字典,实在不敢肯定的可以请教别人或使用范文的说法。其实练模拟题主要目的并不是为了押题,而是提高构思和英汉转换的速度,为了培养一批自己比较喜欢的好词好句。

附:20xx年12月六级作文范文

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on University Ranking. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1. 目前高校排名相当盛行

2. 对这种做法人们看法不一

3. 我认为……

My View on University Ranking

There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for some individuals or organizations to rank universities. Taking a look around, we can find examples too many to list. To this phenomenon people’s attitudes differ sharply.

Some hold the positive view. They claim that ranking universities can help high school graduates or their parents to make a sound choice when enrolling in a university or college. Besides, this practice can help promote the level of higher education as a whole in that many universities will exert efforts to elevate their position.

Others, however, hold the opposite view. They point out that the result of ranking is not always credible, for many individuals or institutions do it merely for the purpose of colleting money. Furthermore, some universities overemphasize the result of ranking and waste large amounts of resources.

Personally, I believe that we should not go to extremes. On the one hand, it must be admitted that ranking is an effective means to encourage universities or colleges to compete with each other and improve their work. On the other hand, it should not be conducted and used in the wrong way.

Today I went to a good friend when playing home to see a good friend who has a pet dog, black eyes, a yellow hair, and a good friend in the dog's neck hung a bell, walk along a road to come will be * ting-a-ling-a-ling sound, listen to a good friend said this dog is very greedy not too long, it has to feed it and it is not a pleasure to see food to eat up.

Look, don't mention how cute it is.

Miss Canada Natalie Glebova was crowned Miss Universe 20xx in Bangkok on Tuesday at the climax of a beauty pageant that once again managed to stumble into controversy.

Glebova, a 23-year-old motivational speaker from Toronto, succeeded last year's winner, Australian Jennifer Hawkins, after the usual evening gown and swimsuit parades that pull in TV viewers worldwide but outrage feminists and traditionalists .

Even though hotly tipped for the title, the final announcement appeared to stun Glebova, who moved to Canada from her native Russia only 11 years ago.

"This is all happening too fast and it's unreal. It's slowly starting to sink in," she told reporters moments after being crowned with the glittering, diamond-encrusted Miss Universe tiara.

Dressed in a long white evening dress, she hugged her parents on stage and then praised her new homeland for giving her and her family the chance to start a new life.

"When we came 11 years ago, we came with nothing, and now we've got so much," she said.

In all, 81 beauties from Albania to Zambia made it to Thailand, riding elephants, touring temples and rollicking on tsunami-hit beaches in the run-up to Tuesday's finale.

In the middle of the show, the conference hall fell silent for a minute in memory of the more than 228,000 dead or missing from the Dec. 26 Indian Ocean tsunami. Nearly 5,400 of the victims were in Thailand.

Sometimes we think of dreams as fantasies - it's easy to do when you have money, rent, and work。 But you can't prepare yourself and jump off the cliff: you should grow your wings first。 A little bit toward the dream。 Step by step。 Take a step forward。 After all, it's your mission。

有时,我们把梦想看成是幻想——当有钱、有租金、有工作时很容易去做。可是,你也不能不加准备及跳下悬崖:你该先长出自我的翅膀。一点点的朝梦想靠近。一步一步的往前走。往前迈一步吧。毕竟,这是你的使命。

Student Use of Computers

Students tend to use computers more and more nowadays. Reading this chart, we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply. In 1990, it was less than 2 hours; and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours; while in 20xx, the number soared to 20 hours.

Obviously computers are becoming more and more popular. There are several reasons for this. First, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life. Also, the fast development of the Internet enlarges our demands for using computers. We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Internet. Besides, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enables more students to purchase them.

Along with the time spent on computers, there arise some problems. The most serious one is that many students are spending so much time playing PC games so that they ignore their studies. It is urgent to let the students use computers in a proper way.

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秋天里的松鼠

英语作为学习生涯中必不可少的课程,想学好真的不容易。我在此献上英语美文,希望大家喜欢。

英文美文欣赏

布达佩斯之恋 Down in Budapest

The night is long,goes on and on

Before me lies the break of dawn

Another day to wonder

What I'll find along my way

Just what to do I wish I knew

So all alone I'm missing you

The blue Danube

The sun put color of my soul in you

Budapest....

The day begins,the gentle wnd

As sweet as lonesome violins

So clear and bright

I watched the river rolling out of sight

I can't define this home of mine

This home,I'm waiting for the sign

Will I be lessed to find you

Somewhere down in Budapest

I'm lost in memories down in Budapest

I'm lost in memories down in Budapest

......

夜漫漫,时间无休止地流逝

黎明在我眼降临

这一天我又会彷徨,不知道

沿着自己的生命轨道,我将找到什么

该做些什么,我希望我知道

我一直在独自想念你

蓝色的多瑙河

阳光把我灵魂的颜色照进你心里

布达佩斯……

这一天开始了,轻柔的风

和寂寞的小提琴一样美好

如此清澈明亮

我看见河流奔腾出视野之外

我无法给我的这个家下定义

这个家,我在等待着一个信号

上苍会不会保佑我找到你

在布达佩斯街道的某个地方

沿着布达佩斯的街道游走,我迷失在记忆里

沿着布达佩斯的街道游走,我迷失在记忆里

沿着布达佩斯的街道游走,我迷失在记忆里

经典优美英语文章

妙“想”生花 Getting behind the Creative Mind

The world is but a canvas to the imagination.

——Henry David Thoreau

世界对富有想象力的人来说只是一块帆布。——亨利·大卫·梭罗

Creativity is not,as some would have us believed,something to be taken lightly.More than painting pictures or composing original music—creativity could rightly be considered a healing force for societies overwhelmed by the ongoing utilitarian struggles of humanity.Call it a cure for depression,an escape from working—class drudgery,catharsis for the stress and worry that accumulates within us all.Or just call it a fun and productive way to wile away an afternoon.

创造力并不像人们让我们相信的那样,是不以为然的东西。这不像绘画或者原创音乐那样,创造力可以看做是治愈被持续的社会功利斗争所压迫人性的力量.我们称之为治疗抑郁的良药,逃避工薪阶层的苦差事,积压在我们内心所有压力和忧虑的宣泄。或者只是一个消磨一个下午的有趣高效的方法。

But the spark of creativity is not always easily lit.As children,our creative zeal is generally encouraged and allowed to thrive,but as we move into adulthood that zeal tends to atrophy from neglect.Other things take over our lives,such as hectic career schedules and increased social pressure to achieve "status".According to Elisabeth Keating inPieces of Beauty,this is an unhealthy trend spawned from an overly materialistic culture.She gose on to detail the spiritual benefits of a more creative life.

但创造力的火花并不容易点燃。作为孩子,我们的创作热情容易受到鼓励和发展,但随着我们进入成年期,热情往往容易减退。其它事情占据了我们的生活,如简单忙碌的职业计划和为了获得地位产生的社会压力。根据伊丽莎白.基庭的《美丽碎片》,这是由过度的物质文化产生的一种不健康趋势。她继续深究更有创造性的生活的精神上的益处。

Tongue in cheek,Melvin Durai exposes creativity from a more "everyday" and practical angle in his humorous piece,Let the Beer Come to You.Not only have great minds invented personal computers and cell phone technology,they might also bless us with beertossing refrigerators and couches that spit out lost remote controls.

Melvin Durai在用他的诙谐作品《让啤酒来到你的身边》开玩笑似的从日常和实践的角度剖析创造性。

Clearly,the expression of artistic creativity throughout history has been just a instrumental in improving the human condition as any business venture or economic boom.Without it there would be no great works of art to enjoy and puzzle over,no songs to sing badly in the shower,no ho new fashion trends,no novels to read.I ask you,is that the sort of world you want to live in?

显然,纵观历史,艺术创作的表达一直只是一个改善人类生存条件成为一切商业风险和经济繁荣的工具。没有创造力就不会有伟大的艺术作品供欣赏和思索,就没有糟糕的洗澡歌,就没有潮流趋势,就没有小说可以读。我问你们,那是你们想要生活的那种世界吗?

经典英语美文

毕业,继续前进 Graduation and Moving On

At least once a year, there are a lot of graduations.It’s a time when a lot of people move on,from where they were, to another school or another class,or out into a real world.To graduate means to take a step forward, to move onward.I can remember my high school graduation,my graduation from university,and even my graduation from graduated school.Each of those graduations was nice.I took pictures, I got flowers, I hug my parents.I had the motions to moving on, I want to stay and have more fun.But I also want to move on.When we hear the word graduation, we naturally think of graduating from school.But I think it’s possible to graduate from different places, or stages in life.I worked in a company in New York for about three years.In one point I felt I couldn’t learn anything else from the company,where the people I was working with.Then I had hit a ceiling, I felt that was time to move on.The way that I describe that moving on is a graduation.Some times we are thrown out into the world or to the next level,whether we are ready or not.Other times we get the truth when we want to move on.I have experienced both.I preferred the second one, where I have a choice,I like the truth when and how, but we don’t always get what we want,since we can learn from every experience that we have,each experience can be a stepping stone for us to be better people.I know that I take lessons with me every time I graduated,but some times I can be a slow learner.I wonder when my next graduation is going to be.

至少每年一次,会有很多的毕业典礼。这是一个很多人继续前行的时刻,他们从现在的地方到另一个学校或者另一个班级,或者走出学校真正步入社会。毕业就以为这向前迈一步,继续前行。我还记得我高中,大学,甚至是研究生的毕业典礼。每一次毕业典礼都很棒。我拍了照片,收到了花,拥抱了父母。我曾有想继续下去的动力,我希望留下并获得更多的乐趣。但我也想继续前行。当我们听到毕业一词的时候,我们会自然而然的想到学校的毕业典礼。但是我认为我们有可能从人生的不同地方不同阶段毕业。我在纽约一家公司工作了快三年。在某种程度上,我觉得我无法从公司和同事身上学到东西。然后我已经达到了一种上限,我觉得是时候继续前行了。我所描述的继续前行的方式是毕业。有时我们被带入世界或进入下一个阶段,不管我们是否为此做好了准备。其他时候,我们得知当我们想继续前进的事实。我已经都经历过了。我更喜欢第二个,我可以选择,我喜欢这个何时以及如何的事实,但我们不能总是得到我们想要的东西,因为我们可以从我们每次的经历中学到东西,每次经历都可以成为我们成为更好的人的一块垫脚石。我知道每次毕业我都要学习一些东西,但有时候我可以是一名缓慢的学习者。我想知道我的下一次毕业是何时。

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