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整体来说这篇文章还是观点鲜明,连接词也永德恰到好处,错误不多,如果是考试的话,应该能拿高分的! ON BLIND -DATE SHOW During recent years, the topic of date show ,which has aroused the public’s attention, is becoming more and more popular. Undoubtedly ,date ,which is a indispensable part for the development of love, has a profound impact on both individuals and society. Date, rather than anything else, plays an important role in the growth of the love. When you reached the age of marriage, your parents will let you have a date or attend a date show, in order to have a lover. Moreover, you have to execute the order. It is crucial for us to have a clean and definite knowledge of the date show. There is an old saying "It will belong to you ultimately if it really does ". Form my point of view, I think that, the love is development for the time ,not the blind-show.

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Kiwi琪薇

贤妻良母型的吧,温柔的,个子小小巧巧的,我负责赚钱养家,你负责貌美如花。做饭好吃,我下班回到家你就为我准备好一桌丰盛的晚餐。

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美羊羊小P

我是一个颜控,我喜欢长的好看的,最好是声音好听的小哥哥,笑起来很阳光的那种,家世背景什么的都是其次,脸最重要啦,我觉得你长得就很好看。

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靓掣魅影

ON BLIND -DATE SHOW During recent years ,the topic of date show ,which has aroused the public attention ,(此处最好加上逗号前面which引导的句子为非限制性定语从句) is becoming more and more popular. Undoubtedly(大写) ,date ,which is an(粗心) indispensable part for the development of the love,has a profound impact on both individuals and society. Date,rather than anything else,plays an important role in the growth of the love.when you arrived the age that you should get married,your parents must let you have a date(此处have a date改为go dating较好) or attend a date show,in order to have a lover. Moreover ,you have to execute the order. It is crucial for us to have a clean and definite knowledge of the date show. There are old saying "it's yours ,it always yours ".(前一句话可改为According to an old saying,"it's yours ,it always yours ".) From(lz打错了吧,囧) my point of view ,I think that , the love is development for the time ,not the blind-show.(最后一句个人认为意思上有点问题,我给你修改补充了一下—— From my point of view,beautiful love is like beauteous lyrics, which can never expect to meet, but often comes to you in every unexpected moment. Maybe, the love will come along with one casual day not in the way of date shows. So as time goes by, you will find that it's the contingency that the charm of love resides in. Also ,you will find that blind date shows will just lead to the slaying of the beauty of love.)lz还可以适当加一些比较吸引人眼球的短语或句型给自己的文章增色加分,老师们最喜欢这招了~~~~

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which is a indispensable part =which is an indispensable part

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