• 回答数

    5

  • 浏览数

    209

下一个路岔
首页 > 英语培训 > 六级英语写作训练

5个回答 默认排序
  • 默认排序
  • 按时间排序

啾啾啾…

已采纳

一、用形容词“very”,“single”等表示强调Red Army fought a battle on this very spot.红军就在此地打过一仗。Not a single person has been in the office this afternoon.今天下午竟然没有一个人来过办公室。二、用反身代词表示强调I myself will see her off at the station.我将亲自到车站为她送行。You can do it well yourself.你自己能做好这件事情。三、用助词“do”表示强调The baby is generally healthy, but every now and then she does catch a cold.那孩子的健康状况尚好,但就是偶尔患感冒。Do be quiet. I told you I had a headache.务必安静,我告诉过你,我头疼。四、用副词“very”,“only”,“even”,“too”,“just”等表示强调He drank it to the very last drop.他把它喝得一干二净。Only in this way can we wipe out the enemy troops.只有用这样的方法我们才能消灭敌军。He didn’t answer even my letter.他甚至连我的信都不回。I will too go!我要去的!The scenery is just superb.风景真是美极了。五、用“...and that”,“...and those”,“not...too much”,“否定加否定”等结构表示强调They fulfilled the task, and that in a few days.他们在几天内完成的就是那项任务。I gave her some presents, and those the day before yesterday.前天我送给她的就是那些礼物。I can’t thank you too much.我无论怎样感谢你都不过份。I am not unfaithful to you.我对你无比忠诚。六、用短语“in every way”,“in no way”,“by all means”,“by no means”,“only too”,“all too”,“but too”,“in heaven”,“in the world”,“in hell”,“on earth”,“under the sun”等表示强调His behaviour was in every way perfect.他的举止确实无可挑剔。By all means take your son with you.你一定要把儿子带来。The news was only too true.这消息确实是事实。It was over all too soon!此事的确了结得很快!Where in heaven were you then?当时你到底在哪里?Nobody under the sun would buy that car.确实没有人会买那辆车。七、用倒装句表示强调Dishonest he is!他的确不诚实!In wine is the truth.酒后吐真言。八、用强调句型表示强调It was the headmaster who opened the door for me.正是校长为我开的门。It was yesterday that we carried out that experiment.就是在昨天我们做了那个实验写作的过程当中,要注意这样几条高分策略。字迹清楚,段落明朗(clear):字体不要太大,也不要太小,以行间距的三分之一到二分之一为合适;另外,大小要一致,不要忽大忽小;字母的倾斜方向要 一致,不要东倒西歪;要抵着给出的虚线写,不能上窜下跳;总之,要给阅卷人清楚、工整的感觉。段落一般为三段,采用段首缩进式,即每段开头空4至8个字母的格,每段段首缩进的量要一致,要让阅卷人一目了然。内容完整,紧扣提纲(complete):一般来说,六级写作都会给出三点汉语提纲,考生应严格按照三点写成三段。不要有遗漏,也不要随意改变提纲要点的顺序。因为阅卷人要在30秒左右的时间打出分数,所以不希望看到与提纲严重背离的作文。首保正确,再求闪光(correct):这一条是最核心的,因为在写作时间和篇幅都比较短的情况下,考生写出的内容几乎是一样的,唯一的判断标准几乎就是语言的质量。要首先保证语法和拼写正确,哪怕用小词、短句也可以。有能力的话再追求闪光的词句。例如,有考生在写2009年6月的作文时,写出了这样的开头句:There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China. 这句话是套用我以往范文给过的句子,基本结构是对的,但有两处明显的错误。一处为vital,是个形容词,而这里应该用名词。作者可能想用一个牛词来替换 importance以显示用词多样,结果弄巧成拙。另外一处错误为name之前应该有冠词a,其实题目中都给了,结果这位同学忽略了,缺乏基本的语法意 识。其实作文中常犯的语法错误除了冠词错误,还包括时态错误、名词和动词单复数错误、代词不一致错误、词性错误以及句子主谓不完整错误。下笔时一定要谨慎。篇幅关系这里不能赘述。先总后分,连词用上(coherent):这里说的是段落的结构和连贯性的问题。英语文章特别喜欢先总后分或开门见山的格局,另外,段落之间和句子之间的 形式连接手段特别明显,即关联词用的很多。在写作的时候,几乎就是把给出的三点提纲作为每段的开头句,然后再加上两三个扩展句即理由或例证句就可以了。当 然有时候为了论证自然或扩展字数也可以加上一点铺垫的句子。如2009年6月真题作文开头一句既可以是Some people claim that names are of great importance. 也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not. 然后再说Some hold the positive view。后面再加上两三句论证的话。论证句或扩展句之间最好有连接词,如First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。语言简练,论据得当(concise):不要啰嗦,不要过于重复和堆砌。有些考生背诵了一些经典的句型,为了凑字就全用上了,给人低层次的感觉。如最后一 段用同学写道:As far as I am concerned, weighing the pros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. 其实As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一个就行了。另外,尽管内容不及语言重要,但也肯定会影响分数的。考生应尽量平时多练,以期在考场上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和贴 切的例证。另外,要敢于表达自己的思想,不要一味地为了保证语言正确而裹步不前,只说一些小学生的话。如有同学写09年真题第一段时写道:Some people think that names are important. They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him. If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him. 这样的作文倒是没有语言错误,但肯定也得不了高分。作文的展开—按照三步走:1. 题目涉及的现象进行简单的描述,在描述的过程中将写作引向文章的主题(这样的描述可以自己控制,如果第一段落字数单薄,可以适当使描述具体化)。2. 在第一步的基础上给出观点,观点视文章主旨可以分为:个人观点(包括方法、途径),和多方观点(观点从正反两方面或者一个方面的多个层次阐述;在交待观点是需要有原因和支持)。3.个人观点总结点题(同意异表),简要指出方法途径,如果找不到具体的解决方法,则将话讲得圆滑(如果正文中间观点没有必然冲突,则可以融合)。A 1995.1 my view on the negative effects of some advertisements社会上的广告现象越来越多,很多的广告对我们的社会有不良的影响-〉(广告如何多:路边大型广告,报纸一半是广告,电线杆上垃圾广告,电视商业广告频繁。)Today we live in a world of advertisement. Ads appear on broad side boards, take up much of newspaper coverage, slip their way onto walls and constantly interrupt TV programs. However pervasive they are, (尽管他们四处充斥)they always produce a negative influence.从观点的多个层次描写:1.白日抢劫——卖家通过弯曲夸大事实来欺骗消费者购买(化妆品);2.种下不良消费习惯或者价值观(香烟);3.污染环境(牛皮癣和校园商业海报)。To begin with, daylight robbery is made everyday occurrence (白日抢劫每天都在发生)as a result of the negative effects of ads. Harmful ads exaggerate the functions and distort/ignore the facts.(夸大功能,歪曲事实) Every means is tried to hook people into buying(为了诱导人们消费,不择手段). Make-up promotion is a typical case in point.(化妆品促销就是一个典型的例子) Furthermore, misleading ads plant in the mind (在脑海中植下)of consumers, especially young people, a bad consumption habit or, even worse, corrupt values. For proof, look no further than cigarette selling. (香烟销售就是一个典型的例子)Ads with the image of a smoking pop star broadcast an irresistible message.(传递无法抗拒的信息) Last but not least, easily-printed posters and handouts have polluted our environment.个人认为广告负面效应不可避免,要通过严格的法律来减少危害,同时开动脑精,远离它们。Personally, no one can avoid the negative influence. However, we need to step up law enforcement (加强执法)to minimize the harm of such ads. Meanwhile, as consumers, we need to use our head and keep our distance.B 1996.1 Two-day weekend--〉工作效率提高,物质生活富足,人们可能享受2天周末制,—〉(除了工作效率之外:人们对生活水平的期待。)As the productivity improves, our society becomes more affluent than ever before. As a result of such social advance, a 2-day weekend seems not just possible but also feasible.从正反两方面描写,每个方面可以从多个角度来论述:1.有人欢呼,原因如下:1)更长的休息时间,更好的调整精力,更高的效率为新的一周做好准备;2)更 长的时间与家人分享,更加融洽家庭关系;3)可以进行适当距离的旅游,更好的享受生活。2.有人反对,原因如下:1)在某种程度上不利于生产和生活(减少 产出,办事不方便);2)降低效率(周末未完之事必须拖拉两天;周末活动过多造成假期疲劳)。The proponents (支持者)happily welcome a 2-day weekend for the following reasons. Firstly, a 2-day weekend ensures more time for rest(确保足够的时间休息). People can better recover from 5 days hard work(可以更好的从天的工作中恢复过来) and get more refreshed and productive for the coming week. Secondly, a 2-day weekend allows more time to share with one’s family. Thirdly, 2 days make possible(使—成为可能) short-distance travels, so that people needn’t rush through a destination (在一个游玩的目的地走马观花)and can enjoy more of life(更好的享受生活). On the other hand, the opponents(反对者)argue an extended weekend(延长了的周末) causes incontinences of some kind (某种程度的不便)to life and harm to economy, as workers in service agencies (服务行业)and in companies leave position for leisure and recreation.(离职去娱乐享受) What’s more, a longer weekend reduces efficiency(降低效率) and does not necessarily promise (确保)more energy for a new week. Anything that happens on Friday but can’t be finished within that day has to be delayed even longer. After people finish an ambitious travel, they feel exhausted than refueled. (他们感到很疲劳而不是充电了)个人认为是好事,但是要多方面努力,享受好处的同时尽量避免坏处。As for me, I readily welcome the 2-day weekend. Still, we need to make joint efforts to minimize the disadvantages while enjoying a happier life.C 1998.6 do lucky numbers really bring luck?--〉中国这个社会长期以来的传统:喜欢吉祥的数字。数字和运气之间有必然的联系么?--〉(如何喜欢:重要事件选择黄道吉日,如婚庆,开业;手机号码选择吉祥数字等等举不胜举。)It’s a tradition in the Chinese culture to associate lucky numbers with good luck. We select good days for big events like wedding and business ceremonies; we cast huge money for a good phone number or a car plate. Similar examples simply abound in this country(这样的例子举不胜举). However, does this magical relationship exist?从正反两方面描写,每个方面可以从多个角度来论述:1.有人坚信,原因如下:1)几千年的民族传统肯定有他的道理; 2)偶尔的神奇现象也能增加信心。2 .不相信的人也有自己的理由:1)数字只是人类发明的符号,与运气无关。2)如果不遵守科学规律,任何数字都不能确保幸运(车祸)。Those who believe argue that such a tradition dates back thousands of years(这个传统有几千年的历史了). There must be a reason. In addition, occasional coincidences(偶尔的巧合) in history and in life even add to their confidence(增强了他们对这个信心). By contrast, those who don’t believe also have their reasons. For one thing, numbers are nothing but man-made symbols. How can they have anything to do with luck? For another, however lucky the numbers are(不管这个数字都么的吉祥), accidents can’t be avoided if we turn a blind eye to science(无视科学), say, driving a car while being drunk.个人认为数字和运气没有必然联系,因此不能当真。同时尊重这样的一个传统。From my point of view, there is never any relation between lucky numbers and good luck. While we keep this tradition, we should never take it too seriously.

六级英语写作训练

124 评论(15)

买买买嗨嗨嗨

002—19年12月大学英语六级写作之作文第一段写法(二)百度网盘免费资源下载

链接: 

在英语六级考试中,写作部分是不是会另很多同学头疼。不知如何下笔,写出来之后也不知道自己写的怎么样。为了让同学有更加清晰地写作思路,下面为大家提供资料

338 评论(14)

山水平川

要专项突破写作的话,捷径就是狂背经典句子。你在网上搜索经典句子,自己用word编辑成易于背诵的形式打印下来,不要吝啬。常背,哪怕没事的时候就看一下也好,考试的时候直接套就是了。 我六级的作文分数比四级的作文分数还高出了几十分,接近了满分,应该是由于这个原因。

273 评论(9)

汉口小霸王

英语六级作文范文一:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Immoral Behaviors in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:1. 我们经常在公共场合见到各种不文明的行为,叙述你的一次相关经历;2. 这些不文明行为会有哪些影响;3. 我们应该怎样改善这种现象。Immoral Behaviors in PublicWe have all seen or experienced it before---those inappropriate and often unsanitary actions which disgust and annoy most cultured people in society. Spitting, littering, peeing in public - all these and others fall into this category. I personally had the embarrassing experience one late night of seeing a man peeing alongside the river. He was not embarrassed at all.Such inappropriate public behavior has a terrible effect on society. For one thing, most unsanitary behavior can spread germs and diseases to the general public. For another, they contribute to the pollution of the environment and show little or no consideration for the environment.We must take steps as a society to improve this situation. Our government should sponsorpublic announcements and advertisements to emphasize the cultural inappropriateness of this kind of behaviors. Our schools and teachers should teach and enforce acceptable standards for all students. And in the home, parents, grandparents, aunties and uncles should all work together to teach the children what is right by example.英语六级作文范文二:Directions:In this part, you are to write a composition of no less than 150 words about “College Graduates Work as Village Officials”. You should write according to the outline given below. Please remember to write it clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.Some college graduates choose to work as village officials.1. Do you think it is a good idea?2. What can they offer the countryside?3. What can they gain from their village positions?范文:Nowadays, there is a growing tendency that college graduates in mounting numbers choose to work as village officials after graduation. People’s attitudes towards this phenomenon differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. From my perspective, I believe that it is a wise choice.The reason why I support them can be listed as follows: on the one hand, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. Firstly, having received formal education and professional training in universities, college graduates can help peasants master advanced technology. Besides, by spreading and introducing new concepts, they can also accelerate the development of rural culture. Consequently, the gap between the city and the countryside can be gradually narrowed. On the other hand, college graduates themselves can also benefit a lot from being village officials. In the first place, working in rural areas with adverse environmental condition and lower living standard, they are more likely to foster a spirit of hard-working and independence. Moreover, compared with their peers competing for limited positions, those who work as village officials enjoy more opportunities and are more likely to bring their abilities and potential into full play.Therefore, it is a win-win choice for college graduates to work as village officials and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside. (220 words)参考译文:现在,有一种愈发明显的趋势,越来越多的大学毕业生选择毕业后当村官。人们对这个现象的态度明显不同。有些人持有积极的态度,而有些人反对。就我而言,这是一个明智的选择。我支持他们的理由可以罗列如下:首先,大学毕业生可以对农村的发展做出巨大贡献。一,在大学接受了正规教育和专业训练后,大学毕业生可以帮助农民掌握先进的技术。再者,通过传播和引入一些新的概念,他们也可以促进农村文化的发展。因此,农村和城市的差距可以逐渐减少。另外一方面,大学毕业生自身也可以从当村官这件事中受益良多。一、在农村恶劣的环境和较低的生活质量下工作,他们更有可能养成努力和独立的精神。再者,与他们在城市争夺优先的职位的同龄人想必,当村官的学生拥有更多地机会并且更有可能充分发挥自己的潜能。因此,当村官是一个双赢的选择,而且更多地毕业生应该到农村工作。英语六级作文范文三:作文话题:College Students and Luxuries1. 现在不少大学生都拥有奢侈品2. 大学生获得奢侈品的途径有……3. 我认为……范文:College Students and LuxuriesWalking on the campus, you’ll find luxuries are not far away for students. Some wear CK clothes and some carry LV bags. According to an online survey conducted by Tencent in May this year, there are 37 percent students claiming to have a certain luxury.On the basis of the survey, the way of obtaining luxuries is quite different. Some students get them from their parents, as their families are in good financial condition. Some take part-time jobs to buy luxuries by themselves. For example, a college student named Xiao Mei said she worked as a tutor for three months in order to get a bottle of Dior perfume. Some receive luxuries as a gift from their friends or relatives.As for me, I object to students' using luxuries. It is known that luxuries are notable for their super prices. However, students are not economically independent and their attention should be paid to study. In this sense, using luxuries is improper for students.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Curse Can Be a Blessing in Disguise . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.英语六级作文范文四:A Curse Can Be a Blessing in DisguiseA famous saying goes that “A curse can be a blessing in disguise”. Simple as the saying is, its meaning is profound and thought-provoking. Evidently, it is meant to tell us that unfavorable conditions can one day prove to be favorable ones ant that we should not be indulged in depression after we have met setbacks.Actually, history abounds with examples to prove this saying. Taking a look around, we can also find examples too many to enumerate. Here I can think of no better illustration of the proverb than the experience of my own. Though performing well enough in the college entrance exam, I was only provided with the opportunity to enroll in a second-class university. However, I did not lose my heart. Instead, I found the remoteness and quietness of the campus a favorable condition for my study. In terms of English, I have passed CET-4 with a high score. Now I believe I can do the same with my CET-6.Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion, we may say that a curse can also turn into a blessing. So, one should not indulge himself in bitterness and complaint after he meets setbacks. What he really has to do is to seek opportunities and turn adversities into favorable conditions. In a word, we should truly understand the profound meaning of the proverb and take the right actions in our life and work in the future.英语六级作文范文五:Disrupting My Comfort ZoneI was 45 years old when I decided to learn how to surf. They say that life is tough enough. But I guess I like to make things difficult on myself, because I do that all the time, every day and on purpose. That's because I believe in disrupting my comfort zone. When I started out in the entertainment business, I made a list of people that I thought would be good to me. Not people who could give me a job or a deal, but people who could shake me up, teach me something, challenge my ideas about myself and the world. So I started calling up experts in all kinds of fields. Some of them were world-famous. Of course, I didn't know any of these people and none of them knew me.So when I called these people up to ask them for a meeting, the response wasn't always friendly.And even when they agreed to give me some of their time, the results weren't always what one might describe as pleasant. Take, for example, Edward Teller, the father of the hydrogen bomb. It took me a year of begging and more begging to get to him to agree to meet with me. And then what happened? He ridiculed me and insulted me.But that was okay. I was hoping to learn something from him—and I did, even if it was only that I'm not that interesting to a physicist with no taste for our pop culture. Over the last 30 years, I've produced more than 50 movies and 20 television series. I'm successful and, in my business, pretty well known. So why do I continue to subject myself to this sort of thing? The answer is simple: Disrupting my comfort zone, bombarding myself with challenging people and situations —this is the best way that I know to keep growing. And to paraphrase a biologist I once met, if you're not growing, you're dying. So maybe I'm not the best surfer on the north shore, but that's okay. The discomfort, the uncertainty, the physical and mental challenge that I get from this—all the things that too many of us spend our time and energy trying to avoid—they are precisely the things that keep me in the game.

310 评论(15)

馋佬胚祖宗

一、写作要循序渐进

其实这点不难理解,英语四六级写作设计语法、单词、句子、逻辑等多个方面的内容,平时我们做英语的题目,单其中一点都很难解决,更别提写作的时候需要把这写内容都糅合起来了。

不少同学在考前背些模板和技巧,平时根本没有积累,这种情况或许可以考过四六级,但是如果你想高分考过四六级,那就是真的很难了。

二、如何练习写作

训练形式:建议大家的学习任务是:完成当天文本回译,并及时复盘。

回译:回译就是一篇中文的内容,看了答案的英文翻译之后,在自己动手把英文回翻成中文。回译可以让我们更好地了解写作的语法、用词和句式,更好地掌握这些知识点。

在日常的练习过程中,我们可以采用回译+复习的方式来帮助大家更好地消化写作的精彩内容。

笔记+复习:在复盘环节中,同学们在查阅资料后,需要根据解析分析自己的翻译文本,哪些是错误,哪些不够恰当,哪些可以是参考译文的替换表达。

多研究范文,多写多改:学会分析真题范文,真题范文就是最好的资料,想写好英语作文就是要去模仿好的范文。要去研究范文中的行文逻辑,好词好句,然后形成自己的一种写作框架,不断地去写,去更改。

日常积累:比如平时看过的英文文章,听过的英文歌词,还是作文中的好词好句都可以摘抄下来,每天背一背,然后就是可以用英文写手账,写名著小说读后感,长期坚持用英文去写,慢慢地写作能力就提高了。多积累一些高级表达,同样的单词在一篇作文中不要总是重复出现。

111 评论(8)

相关问答